[FFML] [Ranma/Various] Avenging Act IV Prologue
Gary Ee
garyee at starhub.net.sg
Wed Oct 7 12:43:55 PDT 2009
Avenging
Act IV
The Hate Monger and the Peacemaker
Prologue
Ah, its finally returns! ^_^
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“Buckle up your seatbelts, boys and girls. We’re in the final approach
for the destination of the latest Challengers of the Fantastic/Fantastic
Four get-together: the Blue Area of the Moon.”
As opposed to the last one where Johnny brought Reed, Ben, Makoto and Fujiwara to Hooters. When the women found out, the carnage was epic..... Since then no one else but Reed and Makoto were allowed to plan these get-togethers.
After delivering his announcement, Ben Grimm looked over his shoulder at
the assemblage of passengers. His teammates, Susan Storm and Reed
Richards, were sitting together while Johnny Storm had the co-pilot’s
chair. Makoto ‘Mr. Fantastic’ Mizuhara was sandwiched between
Shayla-Shayla and Nanami Jinnai, aka the Human Torch and Invisible Girl.
The rocky form of Fujiwara (come to think of it, Ben still didn’t know
the man’s full name) better known as the Thing, was lamenting being
Lamenting about being sober? Wait till a certain water priestess finds her way out of El Hazard, then your problems will REALLY begin Fujiwara-sensei.
sober. Thanks to a side-effect of traveling to El Hazard, Fujiwara only
had his super-powered form when he was on the wagon, unlike his
compatriots, Makoto and Nanami who could use their abilities of
telemechanics and invisibility combined with force fields respectively,
at will. Shayla-Shayla didn’t count since she actually came from El
In Nanami's case, usually unwillingly.
Hazard and started out with her superpowers.
Pity that Ifurita isn't around at the moment. I always thought she'd make a good Vision if not Ultron.
Johnny was also looking back and let out an audible sigh that caught
Ben’s attention. “Come on, kid. You had to know Reed and Mako would
wanna come back and examine that ancient city we found that last time we
teamed up and took care of the Red Ghost and his Super Apes up here.”
Ah one of those stories. God bless the Silver Age.
“It’s not that,” Johnny told him. “What makes Mizuhara so lucky that he
has two hot girls after him while I have no one? Why can’t we have hot
girls on the team?”
Wait till Shinobu the She-Hulk comes into the picture.
“Actually Suzie’s pretty hot,” Ben pointed out.
“Ewwww! That’s my sister you’re talking about. That just isn’t right.”
Johnny grimaced.
Obviously Johnny has never been introduced to doujinshi. There's probably one featuring not only him and Sue but him, Reed and Ben.
“Which reminds me.” Ben turned to his leader. “Hey Reed, when we busted
Krankyhoff—“
“It was Kragoff, Ben. Ivan Kragoff.”
“Yeah, whatever. Anyway in light of it being cosmic rays that changed
him and his monkeys--”
“None of them were monkeys. They were a gorilla, an orangutan, and a
chimpanzee.”
Do NOT call them monkeys, especially the Orangutan. He'd probably try to twist your head off.
“Anyway,” Ben said in a tired voice. “Remember back right before we
formed the team? You know, when you tried to talk the three of us into
going up with you in that rocket of yours? Except I refused to fly it
because it didn’t have enough shielding to protect us from cosmic rays?
And Suzie called me a coward for it until I pointed out it might do
stuff to her and maybe give any kids she might have three eyes or twelve
toes? She sure changed her tune and got you to back off quick enough. Heh.”
In this universe? He might luck out and be born an all-powerful demigod capable of altering reality. Oh wait.....
“You were right, Ben,” Reed admitted. “Although the odds of encountering
a cosmic storm were poor, and even then there’s no guarantee they would
affect us in harmful ways.”
“I think having a super power would be neat,” Sue said. “I wouldn’t mind
turning invisible.” She looked to Nanami.
“It works for me.” Nanami turned invisible, and back again.
“But being invisible hides your great beauty,” Johnny said, smiling at
the girl.
Nanami scowled at the flirtation and clung to Makoto’s arm even tighter.
Not to be one upped, Shayla-Shayla did the same.
One wonders what Power Peversion Potential Makoto could have with Ifuita given his new abilities. I'm sure both girls are thrilled they left her behind in El Hazard.
Johnny sighed once again and turned to his team’s leader. “Hey Reed, why
can’t we have some girls on the team?”
"Because I don't like sleeping on the couch."
Reed said, “Actually I have been thinking of inviting Alyssa Moy to join
us. Her expertise in a variety of fields would be beneficial to the team.”
“I don’t think so,” Sue said in a tone that dropped the temperature ten
degrees. She then brightened up and her voice took on an almost dreamy
cast. “I think Fay Flourite would be a much better choice. Not only does
he have extensive knowledge of extra-dimensional travel, but also access
to vast reservoirs of magic.”
“Four is the ideal number for our team,” Reed said in a tone that
suggested the discussion was over.
Fujiwara got up from his seat and walked over to stand next to Ben.
“You’d better strap yourself in,” Ben warned. “Not that you can get
injured in the crash, but if you get tossed around you’d crush the rest
of us like a ton of bricks.”
“I only weigh 500 pounds,” Fujiwara said.
“Oh, well I don’t know who couldn’t take a quarter of a ton of bricks
landing on them,” Ben said drolly.
Thor, Hulk, Iron Rose, Hercules, Captain Oni, the Submariner....
“I little hit from a bottle could change all that,” Fujiwara suggested
"A little hit"
with more than a hint of desperation in his voice.
“Uh uh. You know the drill. No drinking until after the adventuring is
done. You never know when strength and invulnerability might come in
handy,” Ben reminded him.
“Oh come on, Just one sip. I won’t be depowered for more than half an
hour. Forty-five minutes tops.”
“I’ve seen your sips. It’ll be time for our next joint meeting before
you rock back up.” Ben wasn’t totally unsympathetic with the man. Being
a pile of orange bricks couldn’t be all that fun, even super-powered.
Ben did just fine using his natural abilities, and so did his teammates.
They had taken down the Mole Man, Miracle Man, the Pluto Organization
with it’s so called ‘Perfect Murder Plots’ for sale, and the team’s
official arch-nemesis: Dr. Doom, as well as a host of others. The
Challengers of the Fantastic were a household name across the globe
thanks to the rogue’s gallery of foes that had defeated. Yep, no need
for super powers in his book.
I wonder who Dr Doom is in this world or if its still Victor von Doom. Jinnai would have been Mizuhara's nemesis if he weren't already Pastepot Pete. Maybe B-ko or Sylia Stingray just to ratchet up the tension between the two women in Makoto's life. If there is one thing missing from Reed's life its a romantic partner that he can converse with as an intellectual equal; Susie isn't dumb by any means but Reed is easily one of the most brilliant minds on a planet where villains can build power armor in their garage. Heroes can do the same in a cave with a box of scraps.
Fujiwara went back to his seat, the chair groaning under his weight as
he buckled up again.
As the rocket flew over the Blue Area of the moon, the groups looked
down on the ruins of a vast city that stretched for miles in all
directions. It appeared as though it had been manufactured of some kind
of crystal, though signs of ancient destruction were clear on every
structure, some of them nothing more than crystalline rubble. It
appeared no building had been untouched.
Both Reed and Makoto examined a number of scanners that fed them
information on every level. A normal mind would never have been able to
grasp the vast amounts of data that flowed past the screens, but neither
man had what would be remotely referred to as a normal mind.
“Wait, Ben, hover here,” Reed said. He looked to Makoto. “What do you
make of that?”
"42? Why does it always transmit the same numbers?"
Makoto focused on the image. “The architecture is far different from the
others, which vaguely resemble ancient Greece. I can’t say it conforms
to any style I recognize.” He closed his eyes, stretching out his
ability to tap into machines to the ground on the Moon. “I sense power
sources there of a type I don’t recognize. Multiple ones.”
“It’s most likely an alien structure,” Reed said, satisfied his
suspicions had been confirmed. “We’re landing here, Ben.”
“You got it.” Expert pilot that he was, it took Ben only a handful of
minutes to set the Challengers’ rocket down on the nearest open area
around the building his leader had indicated.
The teams deployed from the landing ramp, Fujiwara and Ben in the lead
with both Makoto and Reed following close behind while the girls trailed
closely behind their men. Johnny brought up the rear, staring at
Shayla-Shayla and Nanami’s rears, to be specific.
You'd think with good looks, fame and fortune would come vast amounts of feminine attention. I guess its true, girls only dig flaming men.
“I don’t see a door,” Sue said.
“I could burn a way in,” Shayla-Shayla offered, her hand suddenly
enveloped by flame.
“Please,” Nanami said, rolling her eyes. Shayla-Shayla looked like she
wanted to burn her teammate on the spot, but Nanami ignored her, closing
her eyes, brow creased in concentration. “I’m covering the entire side
in an invisible field and pressing it gently inward. Ah ha! Found a
place that isn’t solid.” She pointed to a spot on the wall that appeared
like any other.
Reed walked up to it. “Some kind of advanced holographic image, I
believe.” And walked right in, disappearing from the others’ sight.
“Reed Richards, you slow down before you walk into a trap,” Sue warned
as she pursuing hot on his heels, the others following in turn.
Pursued?
As Johnny entered last he looked around. “Way bigger on the inside than
the outside: definitely alien stuff.” He took in the vast panorama
inside the structure. While the majority of the machinery was
incomprehensible to him, he did recognize viewscreens spread nearly
every few feet along the entire length of one of the walls. They went as
far back as the eye could see.
“You could watch a lot of television in here,” Nanami said.
“I hardly think an advanced alien race would want to watch something as
pointless and mundane as television,” Makoto said.
Ah, I do believe its the Ultimate Voyeur, not that the Blue Area of the Moon didn't already tip me off.
“Yeah, reality TV would convince them Earth is screwed up and they’d
blow up the planet,” Ben said.
Makoto stopped in front of a machine with a blank viewscreen. He stared
at it intently.
Reed stopped next to him. “Is your ability to control machinery telling
you something?”
"Tentacles, so many tentacles! So wrong on many levels. Brain bleach! Now!"
After that day, Mr Fantastic was never the same again.
Makoto held his hand up to the device. Like Nanami earlier, he closed
his eyes as he stretched his senses out again. “Yes, it is alien
technology. Highly advanced. It would take me hours to decipher some of
this. However I think I see how to turn this machine on.”
Ben said, “Maybe that ain’t such a great idea seeing as how whoever owns
this place might not like us messing with it. For all we know it’s his
equivalent of a DVR and we might be messing with the settings.”
Or his "demolish Earth for the pan galactic highway button" but who's to know?
“I wonder what alien porn would look like,” Johnny said.
Watch "Legend of the Overfiend" Johnny.
“Johnny!” Sue said, scandalized at her younger brother’s behavior.
“This is the last recording that was accessed,” Mokoto said, not even
noticing how he ended the argument that had been about to erupt.
The viewscreen flashed on, showing a verdant savannah and a number of
what appeared to be proto-humans. Before them was a thousand foot giant
with a bizarre armored exterior that covered every millimeter of its
surface. Whether it was a living being inside armor or some kind of
robot was impossible to determine.
A voice, booming but gentle began. “Five million years ago the
Celestials arrived on Earth and engaged in their usual habit of
experimenting on what they perceived as the beings with the most
potential for evolutionary advancement.”
Thus creating dolphins.
With a wave of the hand one of the giants encapsulated the proto-humans
into two groups. Beams of some sort of unidentified energy coursed from
its palms, one to each group. Immediately they began to change. One
group became identical to the humans in the room.
“To this end the experimental subjects were divided into two groups. The
Eternals were given a form of increased longevity and the ability to
harness the power cosmic. Due to their longevity this also lent itself
to genetic stagnation.”
Apparently this also affected either their libido or their fertility rates since immortals can have explosion, geometric population growth in just a generation or two.
The other group became divided into a number of wide ranging forms, the
only similarity to one another being a basic bipedal humanoid.
“The other group, the Youma, was given an extremely flexible genetic
code that provided them with adaptability to nearly any potential
environment.”
The picture showed the Celestials, their genetic manipulation complete,
go straight up into the skies, leaving the two groups of beings behind.
The groups each went their separate ways. However the scenes began
changing as Youma and Eternal clashed over and over again in violent
battles.
“A rivalry developed between these two races for several millennia, with
the Eternals winning the outcome on nearly every occasion. Eventually
the Youma were defeated decisively and forced into seclusion under the
oceans and earth, the Eternals determined never to let them see the
light of day again.”
Just like in the Marvel comics, the Eternals don't always come across as very nice people. Quite the contrary in fact.
Once more time sped up, showing the planet changing, and proto-humans
evolving into Neanderthals, and eventually modern humans.
“With the rise of another intelligent race from the planet, a rift
occurred within the Eternals society. Their leader, Zuras, felt that the
Eternals should remain aloof of the newborn human race, keeping their
interactions minimal and allowing humanity to grow of its own accord. He
was opposed by Serenity, who was determined to have the Eternals lead
the humans personally, guiding them to forge a utopian society of peace
and prosperity.”
Fujiwara whistled as the scene changed to show a pair of flying beings,
one a large man with crimson hair and beard fighting a woman of
surpassing beauty with a long mane of blonde hair flowing behind her.
Each of them unleashed powerful beams of energy from both their hands
and eyes at one another, devastating the landscape in a running battle.
One would imagine that being able to project energy from different parts of your body would be useful in the Marvel-verse simply because everyone else tends to look at your eyes or hands. Kinda embarrassing to admit that you managed to outblast Cyclops only because you shoot beams from your navel though.
“The two of them fought for the leadership in a battle that raged for
weeks and left scars on the Earth that exist to this day. In the end,
Serenity emerged the victor. In order to prevent civil war from breaking
out, Zuras and his sympathizers left Earth and established a pair of
colonies on the moons of Titania and Titan, which continue to flourish
at the present time.”
Ben slapped his hand to his forehead. “Aw, man, now I know where we’re
going on our next trip.”
The scenes changed again to the construction of the city which lay so
close to this alien structure, though the great metropolis was in much
better shape than its current ruined state. Sue and Nanami stared in awe
at the city in all its glory, its beauty unlike any they had ever seen.
The voice continued. “Serenity decided to relocate the Eternals to the
moon so that they could look down from above on those they wished to
rule. They created a city they dubbed Crystal Olympia and formed a
breathable atmosphere for any visiting humans, though none would be
allowed to live in the city itself. Likewise Eternals were forbidden to
live on Earth, for it was her judgment that in order to rule humanity
effectively they would have to live apart from it.”
Machievelli, Serenity ain't.
The scene changed to one above the Earth, showing a landmass in the
middle of the Atlantic that wasn’t present on any globe.
“With the construction of Crystal Olympia completed, Serenity decided a
template colony would be forged first before the full enlightenment of
humanity would begin. Atlantis was chosen as the continent on which to
begin their venture. With their vast powers and abilities far beyond
their unexperimented upon kin, the Eternals were made leaders by the
largely primitive humans there. Over the centuries an advanced
civilization was formed on the continent, one that far outstripped the
rest of humanity. It was the beginning of what Serenity dubbed the
Silver Millennium.”
The scene changed again to one focusing on a woman and several men who
were obviously Eternals. They were shown brutally commanding a host of
Youma into carefully coordinated maneuvers.
“However, one of Serenity’s chief advisors, Beryl, betrayed her. Along
with a handful of other powerful Eternals, who aligned themselves with
Beryl for a variety of reasons, the traitors secretly organized and
trained the Youma hidden deep under the earth into a vast army. Then, at
the height of Serenity’s achievements, they struck simultaneously in
Atlantis and on the Moon.”
I would wonder though, what Beryl's ultimate goal was. In the original she served Metallia but here it looks like she just wanted to kill off her own race and be the new Eve.
The others watched in horror as images of millions of people being
either burned or drowned was shown without compassion or remorse and the
very surface of the earth changed from the forces at play as the
landmass in the center of the Atlantic was ravished by explosions across
its entirety.
“Beryl sabotaged the geothermal plants on the continent, causing them to
all to explode, sinking the entire continent.”
"causing them all to explode"
The scene shifted to the crystalline city once again. A bright flash in
the center of Crystal Olympia heralded the arrival of the before
mentioned Youma who came poring out of the portal that had been formed,
Beryl and her generals at the forefront. Immediately they attacked the
denizens of the city, who quickly fell before their onslaught.
“As the shattered remnants of Atlantis slowly submerged beneath the
ocean forever, Beryl and her generals teleported the entire Youma army
into the heart of Crystal Olympia and attacked. While the Eternals tried
to mount a resistance, the Youma army was too powerful and struck too
quickly. As the casualties mounted, it quickly became evident Crystal
Olympia would fall.”
Therefore proving once again the power of the Zerg Rush.
Again the scene shifted, this time to the interior of a great palace,
Serenity at the center of a handful of Eternals that numbered less than
a hundred, all of them looking injured and exhausted. Serenity held up
her hands, a whirling vortex of coruscating energy forming above her.
The Eternals flew into the vortex one by one, their forms changing into
pure energy. Serenity was the last to fly into it, meeting the same
fate. Seconds later a huge yellow thing that closely resembled a brain
emerged from the top of the vortex.
“Serenity summoned the remaining Eternals, and together they transformed
their bodies into one collective consciousness called the Uni-Mind.”
A wave of energy shot out in all directions from the brain, flowing
unimpeded by any physical structure. As the wave touched the Youma, they
disappeared. When the wave touched Beryl and her fellow generals, they
too met the same fate. As the last ripples of energy crossed the surface
of the moon, heading toward Earth, the brain and vortex dissipated,
until nothing living was left in the city.
“Understanding that they would be defeated, the Eternals used the last
of their remaining power to banish Beryl, her generals, and all of the
Youma on both the Moon and Earth into the Negative Zone where they
remain to this day. The effort to banish their enemies used up all the
power of the Uni-Mind, destroying the remaining Eternals on Earth and
the Moon, leaving only humanity as inheritors of the planet. End of entry.”
Ah, so that's how Annihilus and Beryl met.
The screen went blank.
“Well, that was… informative,” Johnny said.
Reed and Makoto already had their heads together.
And all their women tiny sweated from their close physical proximity.
“Inspection of the ruins would lead a lot of credibility to the tale,”
Makoto said.
lead->lend?
Reed was just as eager. “And I’m pretty sure, thanks to that imagery, I
could triangulate where Atlantis might be. This could be incredible. Two
races in Earth’s prehistory that committed genocide on one another, or
at least in one case and banishment for the other. And this ‘Negative
Zone’ idea is fascinating. I wouldn’t mind delving into that.”
Ben rolled his eyes. “Great, we come here to check out a few ruins, now
we have to deal with aliens, Atlantis, and other-dimensional zones. The
fun never stops when you’re a member of the Challengers of the Fantastic.”
Susan looked just as despondent. “I’m never going to be able to pry him
out of the lab once he sinks his teeth into this. It’ll take months. At
least.”
Shayla-Shayla and Nanami looked just as dejectedly at Makoto.
Not to mention the archeological dig once they find Atlantis.
A flash of light heralded the appearance of a mysterious being that
materialized before the octet. He appeared largely human, though he was
twenty feet high and bald with a somewhat disportionately large cranium.
He wore a simple garment similar to a toga with blue embroidery and a
blue cloak.
In a voice identical to the one on the screen, he said, “Intruders, you
have trespassed in the home of the Watcher. While I am forbidden to
interfere in matters, neither can I allow strangers into my home.”
Which is Watcher speak for "okay, you got the information I wanted to impart to you but couldn't outright tell you because of my oath. Now please leave before the Council of Watchers disintegrate me."
The octet suddenly found themselves in the middle of the city they had
come to investigate.
“Whoa!” Fujiwara said. “Now that was impressive.”
“Fascinating,” Reed had his hand to his chin in thought. “He instantly
teleported a large degree of matter across an impressive distance. His
abilities are astonishing. He may very well be one of the most powerful
beings we’ve come across, to say nothing about his access to all of that
amazing technology. He really need to speak with him again.” Reed
He->We
started to walk in the direction of the Watcher’s home when Sue blocked
his way.
“Oh no you don’t, Reed Richards. You are going to respect that man’s
wishes and leave him alone.”
“But Sue,” Reed started to complain.
"Reed, don't antagonise the irritable demigod."
"Yes, dear."
“I won’t hear of it. Just because he has something you want doesn’t mean
he has to give it to you, and he made his intentions perfectly clear.
And another thing—.“
As the sounds of a speech started, Johnny and Ben quietly escorted the
Fantastic Four away. Ben said, “Suzie’s going to give Reed a reality
check and dress him down a bit. It ain’t going to be pretty so why don’t
we check out some of these ruins? It is why we came here in the first
place.”
Hearing the lecture begin, the others nodded their heads and walked away.
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[End Prologue]
[Writer’s notes] Now for those worried about me overpopulating the fic
with heroes, have no fear. I have no intention of using either of these
groups in the near future. On the other hand, the information they
learned will be very key for what is about to begin.
Great to see Avenging back in action and (presumably) the resident incarnations of the sailor senshi to boot. I wonder if that means the Inhumans are lurking somewhere about now that the Celestials have made it into Avenging continuity? In any case, great writing and looking forward to the next chapter.
Regards,
Gary
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