[FFML] [One-Shot][Sailor Moon Fusion] MMSS: The Beginning

StudioPC studiopc at sbcglobal.net
Wed May 20 09:08:07 PDT 2009


On May 20, 2009, at 8:32 AM, DB Sommer wrote:

> StudioPC wrote:
>> Beryl smiled as she walked into her palace. Hers by right. Was she  
>> not
>> smarter, better looking, older? But no, their idiot father had given
>> the throne to Serenity. Even Beryl putting a knife to his throat
>> hadn't swayed him. And then it had slipped. Oops. But still, Serenity
>> had taken the throne.
>>
>
> % And Regicide is such a popular means of wresting control as well. :(

Beryl's not exactly burdened with scruples . . . or imagination.

>> She turned to the catwoman with glowing red eyes. "Luna, my friend. I
>> have a job for you."
>>
>>
>
> % Neat little twist

Oh, I have a few more.

>> "Naw, there's five," Makoto drawled and pointed with her thumb.
>>
>
> % I do like the Makoto laidback version you use

A lot of people seem to. I've actually got ideas for sequels and I'm  
trying to decide if Makoto snaps, there is a reason she's so laid  
back, but it might be funnier if she never does.

> "And Minako," Rei amended.
>>
>>
>
> % Which would indeed constitute an 'us' now.

Rei may be a tiny bit full of herself.




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