[FFML] [Ranma] Good Advice

[Alex Tomas]

Good story although I have to say I liked Laundry Day more.  It's probably
because of Ryoga; I never could get into stories featuring him.

Anyway, there are a couple of errors:

>No one was more shocked and amazed at the news that Ryoga and Akari had
broken up *then* Akane Tendo.

Should be "than."

>At first he had been thankful that he'd stumbled into Akane, thankful that
she'd been *their* to comfort him.

Should be "there."

Thanks again for sharing.
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