[FFML] [Fusion][Sailor Moon] MMSS 3 - The First Mission

StudioPC studiopc at sbcglobal.net
Tue Jun 2 10:15:02 PDT 2009


On Jun 2, 2009, at 8:13 AM, Michael Gilson wrote:

> Very entertaining, but here you have Ami leaving with Makoto and
> still being on the scene with Artemis.
>
> Michael Gilson
>
> On Jun 2, 2009, at 4:15 AM, StudioPC wrote:
> -snip-
>> He nodded and cast the teleport spell, the mall vanishing to be
>> replaced by the control room. Waving his staff, Artemis levitated the
>> box into the air and powered down from Senshi mode. "Ami, you had  
>> best
>> get back to school before you're missed."
>>
>> "I'm never missed," Ami murmured, too quiet for anyone to hear. She
>> nodded and vanished.

?

The first sentace says that Artemis teleported back to the Command  
Center . . . I really need to name it, actually.

Still, can't hurt to rework it.




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