[FFML] [Fanfic][AU][Sailor Moon] MMSS 4 - History Lessons and Mounting Up

[Bob Schroeck]

>> "Queen Serenity's rein was known as the Silver Millenium," Artemis
>> said proudly. "We had safety, security, and thrived in a rennisance
>
> % This is misspelled

Actually, if you want to be accurate, two, maybe three words in this
passage are misspelled.   It should be "reign" ("rein" is what you
use to control a horse), my spellchecker suggests two "n"s in
"Millennium" (although I will admit different sources prefer different
spellings), and "renaissance".

>> "Artemis, please." Serenity sounded embarassed. "I did nothing more
>> then my duty."
>>
>> Rei nodded. "Now tell me about Beryl."
>>
>> Artemis sighed. "Beryl is . . . was Serenity's oldest sister. They
>> were both excellent mages, and Beryl had their father's tatical
>>
>
> % tactical

And "embarrassed".

> % I don't think you ran this through spell check

Agreed.  Just in the passages you quoted, DB, there are many
many more misspelled words than the ones you've flagged.  And
also "right wrong words", like "rein" above, which will pass a
spellcheck with flying colors.   A traditional proofread is
definitely needed here.

-- Bob

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Bob Schroeck          http://www.eclipse.net/~rms           rms at eclipse.net
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Then the horns kicked in...
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