[FFML] [XOver] Wednesday's Child: Chapter Three

[skychan]

I found this chapter to be particularly ammusing.  I'm a little unsure about
the blase attitude that not Ranma but his temporary roommate had about the
curse.  I can see how Ranma might have gotten a bit cavaleer about showing
someone he fully expected to spend a lot of time with, but the reaction
should probably have been a bit stronger.

The bit with Misa Hayase was terribly ammusing and fun.  Its very good that
her father doesnt know the entirety of the day's activities or he would be
rather angery about the shopping I imagine.  I also like the last line, its
a great way to end a chapter.
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