[FFML] [XOver] Wednesday's Child: Chapter Two

[Druid]

   Quite a fun story you've got here. I've read several Ranma 1/2 / 
Macross cross-overs, but this one is unique. In particular the detail 
you go into about the how and why Ranma got into the military. It's not 
instant, wham I'm flying a veritech. The pacing works well for me, and 
it's moving fairly well considering the tack you're taking. I'm looking 
forward to seeing more of this.