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lurched slowly to the opening, and a moment later Ligeia had helped her
down, and leapt up to lift Nene's pink-suited form to the roof.
"The surge should come within the next five seconds," Ligeia observed.
"You'd best close down your suits until it passes."
Even as she ended light flared brilliantly below, and there was the sound
of a distant explosion.
"Can we--" Linna began.
"Down!"
Ligeia's scream was so unexpected that Priss, and Linna simply froze. Then
the DA blurred, and both found themselves prone on their backs.
"What the--" Priss began, and shrieked in alarm as something came
screaming at her from above.
In the next instant a splintering crash seemed to split the air about her,
as whatever it was smashed into the roof almost by her head, exploding
into a spray of brilliantly glittering shards, and sparks. Turning
frantically towards it, Priss began to pull herself upright, then whipped
round as a second crash and explosion had Linna screaming and twisting
wildly from the splintering missile as it slammed into the roof beside
her. She too started to stand, then both were sent tumbling again as a
sudden concussive blast smashed down on them from above.
For one dazed moment both stared stupidly into the sudden roiling, boiling
blackness where the stars should have been. Then with an ear-splitting
shriek a sleek, gleaming craft exploded from the rift, and nearly struck
the Knightwing head-on as a barely-glimpsed human figure fought
desperately to avoid the collision.
For a frozen moment longer the blackness continued to boil, then with a
final cataclysmic thunder-clap that half stunned the two where they lay,
it spat forth a second craft, and twisting viciously, it engulfed the
stricken Knightwing for a moment before whirling away, hissing and roaring
as it lurched towards the street below, and struck ground, vanishing in a
nerve-shattering explosion.
Priss had one stupefied moment to stare, before the wildly swerving craft
nearly took her head off before spinning crazily, flipping end over end,
and finally glancing off the roof with a shattering crack before
disappearing over the edge. Priss could almost have sworn that she heard
the sounds of female screaming from inside.
"Sh*t! Idiots!" she heard her own voice shriek. "Don't you even know how
to hit something properly?"
Then a flash from below, and Linna's disbelieving: "They're shooting at
one another!" made her lurch to her feet to stare.
It was true. Seeming utterly oblivious to the pitched battle in the street
below, the two craft were circling wildly above the chaos, flashes of
brilliant energy spitting between them as each tried seemingly in vain to
hit the other. Then as the two watched in dazed astonishment, the slender
figure of a red-headed woman, dressed in something that had even Priss
blushing furiously, leant insanely far out of the second of the craft, and
let loose with a volley that caught the other full on before it had a
chance to turn.
For a moment it spun crazily out of control. Then with a last dying howl
it shot straight down, and smashed flaming into the very midst of a group
of desperately-fighting Youma. The resulting blast sent a roaring tide of
fire raging through those that had not been killed outright by the initial
explosion. Then a piercing scream made Priss whirl.
"I don't want to die! I've just been paid, and he shot my hair! I don't
want to go to heaven with my hair a mess! Do you hear me? Stop screaming,
and *do* something!"
The only answer was a rise in the volume of the other woman's scream.
Then Ligeia had leapt from the roof, and a moment later the screams turned
to shrieks of disbelief as she smashed through the roof of the craft, and
caught up one of its occupants in each arm, surging free only a moment
before the machine carved a trench into the street before bursting into a
blinding pillar of brilliantly blazing fire.
"What the...!" Mackie gaped as Ligeia soared to land beside Priss once
more.
Priss had not even realised that both he and Sylia had joined them until
he spoke. Her attention was fixed dumfounded on the two scantily-dressed
strangers, as they clung to Ligeia for all they were worth, and continued
to shriek, eyes tightly closed.
"Um...I think you might be safe now?" Linna tried. But abruptly she choked
into silence, turning to stare in alarm at Sylia.
"What's the matter?" she demanded, her voice rising once more.
"Marina, Camilla, and Liana," said Sylia, her own voice little more than a
whisper. "they're gone."
"Gone!" Linna started stupidly, then another gasp made her turn to stare
in shocked confusion at Nene.
The young pink-suited figure had removed her helmet, and was staring in
open-mouthed stupefaction at the two girls a suddenly frozen Ligeia still
held, a shocked, helpless expression of utter disbelief frozen on her face
that might even have been comical, were it not for their situation.
"My God! My God! My God!" she kept saying over, and over again. "It
*can't* be! This isn't possible!"
"What!" Priss exploded, whirling to glare at Nene. "Damn it Nene; what the
hell is it now!"
"It's...it's Kei and Yuri!" Nene gasped softly at last, turning to regard
Priss with wide, staring eyes. "It's the Dirty Pair!"
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Notes:
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And the third that nearly spelt the end! Hardly surprising I suppose, as
this and Ch. 5 were originally one massive chapter. Again, this needed a
great deal of work, but I believe it's paid off. The DK crew and their
Negaverse counterparts at last have real justification, the fate of their
people being almost inevitable, given the impossible situation into which
they've been thrown.
I'm vastly happier also with Liana's introduction, and the background that
explains the enormity of what she's suffered, and what Fellini did to her.
Again, it's a tremendous pity I probably will never write the BGC
stand-alone that these two chapters deserve.
One last thing. It seems Madigan was supposed to have died in BGC6,
something I (like most it seems) missed. I could have changed her to an
original character, but doing that seemed pointless, and fortunately, her
death need not have happened. I assume that in this alternative she was
reached in time after Largo's defeat, and has recently resumed her
position.
Oh, and yes; the late, unlamented Kosuke Yoshida - was -
related to Miriam. Kosuke was his uncle, and hated the younger Yoshida
with a passion, a centiment very much returned in kind. Miriam would be
overjoyed at his uncle's demise.
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