[FFML] [Fic][SM] Sailor Who?
DB Sommer
sommert at connecttime.net
Sun Sep 14 17:03:47 PDT 2008
% I wonder if this is what I think it's going to be from the title. If
I ever find the time, there are a couple of Haruhi shortfics I want to do.
Angus MacSpon wrote:
>Been a while since I posted any fiction. This is a piece of fluff, but
>the idea amused me.
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% I do lots of fluff. Some of it seralized as a bunch of Fusions That
Should Never Be. :)
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>"Sailor Who"?
>By Angus MacSpon
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>Based on characters and situations created by Naoko Takeuchi.
>Comments and criticism welcome.
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>"So it doesn't bother you?" asked Usagi.
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>"Not in the least," said Setsuna.
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>Ami only sighed.
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% I think I would drop 'only' myself.
>The three were walking slowly down a quiet side-street in the middle of
>town. It was Saturday, nearly eleven at night, and the city was
>bustling; but the road around them was nearly empty and they could speak
>without fear of being overheard.
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% Well, I know what you mean, but 'nearly' isn't the same as 'empty' and
someone might be able to say, read lips.
>Tonight had been a Girls' Night Out at a local restaurant, one of the
>rare ones when all nine of them had made it. Usagi, Makoto and Ami had
>to deal with baby-sitters these days when they wanted to go out,
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% Ah so. Much in the future, I see.
>So they continued to chat on their way. After a little,
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% dangles. A little what
>"But they said Pluto is only a *dwarf* planet --"
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>"You aren't going to let this go, are you?" asked Setsuna, irritated.
>"Come on, Usagi-chan. Size doesn't matter. Ask any man."
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% The breast enchancement industry disagrees. If there was a workable
one for penis', it might be an even bigger industry.
>Setsuna shook her head, ignoring the by-play,
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% Hmm. If she's shaking her head, it doesn't seem like she's ignoring it.
> and went on, "Look, it
>doesn't matter that the astronomers call Pluto. It doesn't matter how
>big it is. What matters is whether it has a soul."
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% So she's saying James Brown could concievably be the mightest senshi
of all?
>Setsuna shrugged. "She started it." They walked on in silence for a
>few moments, and then she shook her head with a snort. "Dwarf planet,
>indeed."
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% Cute. Concise and to the point. Melikes.
DB Sommer
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