[FFML] [fanfic][Sailormoon] Moonshadow, chapter 9 (first draft)

[The Eternal Lost Lurker]

>> 9: What's your name, little girl?
>
> Or The Who's "Who Are You".

Overused,

> There's Icehouse's "Hey Little Girl."

Doesn't fit. Thanks, though. :) I've decided to stick with this title for 
now...it isn't TOO bad.

>> King had diffused an awkward moment for the foreign girl when several of 
>> her
>
> SP:  Defused.

Ugh, I can't believe I missed that. Thanks. (And it's not a misspell so much 
as a word error, which is even more embarassing, actually.)

>> "Sou da."
>
> Not "Sou ka"?

'ka' implies an interrogative, 'da' is a statement.

> This... isn't Prof Tomoe, is it?  Because if so, well, *yikes.*

Yes. Yes it is. And by now EVERYONE should have figured out who "King" is.

>> "I apologise for startling you, but your...missive did sound rather 
>> urgent.
>> Allow me to introduce myself.
>>
>> "My name is Artemis."
>
> Showing up uninvited in an underaged girl's room is... entirely
> in-character for this version of Artemis, it seems (Dangit -- I *like*
> Artemis).

Oh, this particular incarnation of Artemis is a COMPLETE rat bastard. >:)

Thanks for the comments!

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