[FFML] [spamfic] [WAFF] The Courtship of Tendou Kasumi
Steffan
res1hhv1 at verizon.net
Sat Mar 8 17:57:06 PST 2008
At this point, my suggestion would be after the marriage attempt (or
second, or third) for Akane and Ranma. At that point, Kasumi will be a
legal adult according to Japanese law, and will be seriously wondering,
"What's in it for me??"
By that time, she should have bought a clue, even in canon.
--Steffan
Ambulatory Kettle wrote:
>> From: nouma at msn.com
>>
>> Y'know, this rather reminds me of my very first fanic, "Heart of the
>> Home".
>> I've always enjoyed Kasumi and I like reading stories about her.
>>
>> I'd urge you to keep going, I like what you've written so far.
>>
>> -Richard
>>
>
> Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. It's been awhile since I read "Heart of the Home," but I remember enjoying it and enjoying your characterization of Kasumi, so I count this as high praise.
>
> As for continuing the story, I'm not sure where I would go with it at this point, but I'll definitely keep it in mind. I doubt I'll expand this little snapshot (though nothing's out of the question), but I might write some follow-up(s) to it, possibly more little snapshots like this, possibly something with more narrative continuity, but I don't know if I can sustain this tone and style for more than a couple pages at a time. ^_^;;
>
>
>> From: kinai2k7 at gmail.com
>>
>> It is a good piece of WAFF and romance and worth all the kilobytes.
>>
>> Well done!!
>>
>> Kinai.
>>
>>
>
> Thanks. :)
>
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