[FFML] [fanfic][Ranma/MKR] Fire in the Water, Act 2

[The Eternal Lost Lurker]

> When speaking of Jusenkyo what about the spring of drowned twins,

Um...did you even READ the chapter? Jusenkyo isn't an option. Period, end of
sentence. Even if it WERE it wouldn't be, because this is post-v38, and
Jusenkyo is completely flooded.

I *very deliberately* took every measure I could to utterly remove Jusenkyo
as a deus ex machina.

> and I'm
> curious when/if people are going to realize that Cephiro is a land where
> will is power, and that could very well mean Hikaru can get a new body if
> she just wills it hard enough.

It doesn't work that way. If it did, Presea wouldn't have died. If it did,
Eagle wouldn't have died.

>  Given the variable nature of power in
> Cephiro I think that as you continue to write you should be careful to
make
> sure you are taking things like this into account.

I believe I am taking everything into account--and doing so quite more
thoroughly than you are, I daresay.

> For example, the sickness in Cephiro, it has to be more powerful than even
> the pillar's love for zagato, and his love for her, given that if it were
> not they should be able to overcome it.  Thats a very impressive statement
> given the worldview of the genre your writing in.

You are simultaneously grossly underestimating me as a writer, and grossly
overestimating the nature of Cephiro, as well as blithely ignoring the
possibility that someone could indeed create a slow poison that would
simultaneously kill Cephiro AND the Pillar.

Anything else?

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