[FFML] [Sailor Moon] Double Exposure 1 [Dark/Comedy]

[Mike Ching]

From: "Brian Randall" <durandall at gmail.com>
>grey -- gray

British -- American

Please remember that spelling can be different between
countries and still be (somewhat) correct. I live in
Australia but was originally from the Philippines
(American English taught there), and have been told
off plenty of times regarding my use of "A" instead of
"E" for some words.

The exception would be if you're talking about a Grey
(alien), then you should be using an 'e' and a capital
"G"...^_^

To the fic author: Reading through this fic, I'm
reminded of a fic I began to write down but gave up
on--mainly because I just couldn't put enough real
humor into it (segment attached below). You're doing a
hell lot better than me, so just mind your p's and
q's, and keep up the writing! The more you write (and
read--real books, not fanfiction mind you), the better
you'll be able to write.


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"No sir," he licked his lips nervously, then tapped on
the photos he'd managed to process. "Pictures don't
lie. You can see for yourself what they are. What do
you see?"

"Pre-teen girls in wedding dresses."

"Uhhh...Yeah, they are," More snickers. Kakeru counted
to ten, fighting the urge to toss his new Nikon 233
camera at the editorial staff. "Look, I know it looks
weird and probably sounds weirder, but I caught these
pictures just two days ago. There were four girls in
wedding dresses, and they were fighting a--an--I know
this'll sound crazy--an old woman wearing a leather
bodice and holding a whip."

"Wedding dresses. Preteen girls. Fighting a
leather-clad granny with a whip," Much to his credit,
the editor kept a completely straight face while he
said it. "Yep, gotcha. Go on."

"I was trying to take pictures of all of them, but I
only managed to snap off these four shots before
running out of film. But believe me, I swear, this was
all for real! I KNOW what I SAW! Sir!" Kakeru then
started chuckling nervously. "...I am -NOT- going
crazy!!"

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