[FFML] [Ranma/MKR] Fire in the Water, act one (draft complete)

[Andrew Norris]

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I don't know, I think there's been at least some minimal improvement.

One of the major problems with Kaydee's fics in the past is that they
read like very short outlines or summaries of a longer story - they
are all tell and no show. On a scale of 1 to 10, few rise above a 1.

: Shadow, you'd think with over 6 years (jeeze) of time, she'd get to at
least 3.
: The problem I have with her, is simple.  She basically completely ingornes
those -who- try to help.  hides behind stuff, and
: DOES NOT take critism.  I cannot mention the number of times people
HONESLTY tried.   While ELL's statements WERE over the top
: and worthy of a ban (and ELL even notes it) they do NOT make a single word
untrue.  Ask Nightelf, Gary, etal.  ELL is taking
: one for the team to say what has to be said.  I fully agree with it, and
honeslty, glad someone's doing it.
: A.