[FFML] [AMG][Songfic][WAFF] Always Forever

[Robert Atendido]

>All in all, I liked it. Of course I also love both AMG and you managed
>to pick one of my all time favorite songs so I might be slightly
>biased.

Thanks, and it's one of my favorites too.  I wouldn't be surprised if someone else thought of the idea before, actually.

>Of course that doesn't stop me from being nit picky, so on to th nit pickiness.

Okay!

>Just as a cultural nit pick, Japan has a zero BAC limit and very, VERY
>strict DUI laws (As in fines running into the millions of yen and jail
>time if you drive and a very harsh fine if you knowingly let someone
>who has been drinking drive). Maybe having Keiichi mention this before
>offering the room?

Yep, I know...but it doesn't mean it doesn't happen at all in Japan.  Earlier this year, there was a government official in Fukuoka (iirc) who while driving drunk had a head-on collision on a bridge, killing a young family.  Also, last year a couple of guys managed to total their car about five minutes walk from my apartment....

...but you're right.  I should change it.

>Hmm... It would seem odd that after what happened, and given that Bell
>is a big tea drinker, that they would have coke lying in the house
>anyway. Mayhaps a line about grabbing a bottle brought by a guest? It
>would make it more of an accident on Urd's part than something she
>planned deliberately.

What makes you think she didn't?  (^_^)

Seriously, I actually had that line in when I first wrote it, but edited it out when reducing the overall wordiness of the fic (a common flaw in my writing, alas).  I'll look at it again.  (My initial thought was that maybe Keiichi likes Coke.)

(OT:  The ad campaign for Coke Zero here was kind of amusing.  I couldn't think of a way to work it into a fic, though.)

I might actually try to remove most of the introductory bit altogether.

>
>*Snipage*
>And the rest is purely WAFFY, but I's likes it. Thanks for the warm
>pick-me-up this very cold morning.

You're welcome!

RJA
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     --Anais Nin