[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Bleach] Pale Horse Chapter One: The Technique
skychan
skywize at gmail.com
Tue Jul 31 14:52:15 PDT 2007
I don't see chapter 2 anywhere, can you email it to me?
On 7/31/07, Timothy Groves <groves_ca at yahoo.co.uk> wrote:
>
> skychan wrote:
> > Wow, I'm impressed, a Bleach crossover I actually like. Normaly through
> no
> > fault of Bleach itself I cant stand the crossovers.
> Mine is the first I have encountered. :)
> > You however have
> > intrigued me. I think that Cologne was a bit too forthwright about it,
> and
> > Happy a bit too clear. It might have been better if it was not in fact
> just
> > some amazon technique but rather that she helps Ranma translate Happy's
> > writing. She can still pass on all the information but it seems less
> likely
> > that she would give help to keep him from killing himself over one of
> Happys
> > techniques than give away the village's knowledge for free. You might
> even
> > have her require him to let her copy or have happosai's original scroll
> for
> > her help.
> >
> These are good points, and I shall make a note of them for the final
> version.
>
> Thanks for writing!
>
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