[FFML] [Sailor Moon] [Draft 1} The Beast Within - Chapter 2
StudioPC
studiopc at sbcglobal.net
Thu Aug 30 10:06:33 PDT 2007
On Aug 30, 2007, at 10:59 AM, The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:
>
> Well, just enough survived of chapter 2 to tell me two things:
>
> 1: You're using the dub names, which automatically fails this fic.
>
> 2: What little of it came through displayed a thoroughly uninteresting
> premise. Even if you get the posting bug worked out, I doubt I'd
> have read
> it.
>
> In other words, you might as well leave it all fucked up and
> Cthulu-summoning-ritual looking. It's the best thing this story has
> going
> for it. :)
1. The original version, written many years ago, used the dub names.
Figured I might as well keep it.
2. Well it's interesting to me.
I appreciate the thought, but the last thing anyone needs is an Elder
God in their mailing list.
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