[FFML] [Howl's Moving Castle] The Woes of a Whipping Boy (shortfic)

[Aishuu Shadowweaver]

--- Robert Atendido <ratendido at mac.com> wrote:

> Interesting.  Just a couple of nitpicks:
> 
> >He studies his abused hand, which is riddled with
> >pinholes, knowing he's going to need a bandage.
> 
> Riddled...?  He let her stick him more than once!?

This is Michael. He's not always very quick - and the
aunt was vengeful!
> 


> >His hair – currently tinted the glorious
> >gold he's become fond of – is set off quite well,
> 
> Whatever punctuation you used there (em-dashes?)
> didn't seem to come through in plaintext....

Hmmm... will check into that.
> 
> Because I normally skip over the pre-fic notes, it
> took me a few seconds to realize you were using the
> original book rather than the movie.  It fits in
> well with what I remember -- I haven't read it in a
> while.
> 
They were classics! Which I reread about once every
three years. Geez, I'm getting old.

> I wonder if the Chrestomanci stories would make good
> anime?
> -- 
...I dread the thought. Chrestomanci is so thoroughly
English that the idea of what the Japanese would do to
him kind of makes me flinch. Though... now that you
mention it... it might be terribly interesting....

Thanks!

~ A.

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