[FFML] Errata for Moonshadow 4...
The Eternal Lost Lurker
lurkerdrome at sbcglobal.net
Thu Aug 23 00:22:02 PDT 2007
This is a relatively minor continuity error, but I'm glad I caught it before
I started working on chapter five and it erupted into a nightmare:
The events of the first two chapters took place on Monday. This puts the
major events of chapter four on Saturday afternoon. This means the following
day would be Sunday, and a non-school day, contradicting what I indicated in
some clumsy, continuity-flubbing narrative in chapter four. ^^;;
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