[FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Final Fantasy VIII] A Fated Child


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "David Johnston" <rgorman@telusplanet.net>
To: "Andrï¿½s Lou" <chinolou@hotmail.com>
Cc: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Sunday, February 11, 2007 11:16 PM
Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Final Fantasy VIII] A Fated Child

Andrï¿½s Lou wrote:


"Indeed, it isn't," said Quistis with a sigh. "But since
when does Rinoa care about rules? And I think she's
sticking the habit to Squall too."


And I think she's infecting Squall with that attitude.


Is the sentence you corrected gramatically wrong? Or does
it just sound awkward?


"Ah! Ladies!" Headmaster Cid said loudly, seemingly coming out of
nowhere. "Wonderful job! I'm so proud of my students right
now I could burst! And, just between you and me, I sure feel
relieved that I did manage to pick up the right choices of
Instructors to handle the ceremony."


I don't think you should capitalise "Instructor", here.


But "Instructor", at least in this context, is a title, so I do
believe it should be capitalized, but, hey, if you do know better than me... 
;-)

"Oh, don't say things like that! Sometimes, I just don't know
what to make of them. Did I tell you about that poem I found
on my desk?"

"The one about the Gold that flows like a River from your


gold that flows like a river


It is a poem, and the nouns "Gold" and "River" are meant to be
proper. But, again, I'll bow my head if I'm mistaken.

Hey, thanks a lot for your time! I had thought that nobody would pay any
attention to my fic T_T. All of the other things you noted were gladly
corrected for the final version.

Andrï¿½s
aka
Faethin 


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