David Johnston wrote:

I'm going to post this to fanfic.net, so I thought I'd repost it, just 
in case there's something I've overlooked.

                                Dare Mo

"Lipstick?  Is that what your staring at?"  She answered his

	you're

"If my child is going to travel across China, I might as well
accompany...her.  Particularly since I wouldn't mind a visit to
Jyusenkyou myself, and I can use some company on the way.  I've got
enough money that with whatever you saved over the last couple of
months, we can leave immediately.  Fair enough?"

Ranma-chan just nodded, her eyes sparkling a little with unshed
tears.

	Nice.  No major  OOC-ness (Genma was abnormally sensible and erudite, 
but maybe someone pounded some sense into him), the characters 'sounded' 
natural and unforced, and things flowed smoothly.
	The Street Fighter ref was cute without being overdone.  That wasn't 
Guile she was fighting, by any chance?  He was, IIRC, USAF, not USMC 
(though who knows where he picked up his hand-to-hand training -- it's 
not a major Air Farce thing).




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