eimii wrote:
Huzzah!
Jumping to the head of my too-large, too-stagnant C&C queue...
My dusty C&C queue is relatively short, because i don't get a chance to read much >_<;...
I tend to C&C while I read, so the large size of my C&C queue speaks to
my lack of reading time (much less writing time) lately.
Violence Warning: There are fights in this chapter! More importantly,
Anko is in the general vicinity of one of these fights; you should
probably realize what that means, by now. You have been warned!
Glee!
Someone is always pleased by the violence ^_^;...
Hee.
It is probably worth mentioning that your Gai cracks me up. :)
That's good to know. It's a pity i don't get to use him more often; he's fun to write...
Fun, but it can be tough to strike the proper balance between
seriousness and comedy with him, at least for me. I can write him in
small doses, but I don't know if I'd be able to handle a story where he
was a main character.
Moving away from the group, Sakura changed directions as soon as she was
out of sight; she wasn't getting any closer to that monster than she
had to. *What he hell is with that, anyway?* She'd have to review her
clone's memories carefully once they returned to her.
One has to wonder whether Anko gets the memories too...
That's an interesting question; it might also have an interesting answer...
...hmm. Hmm.
Interesting. :)
If Sakura had 'activated' the clone when she was still near Gaara,
the possibility of at least a few snakes managing to bite him before
they were destroyed was rather O_o;... unless, of course, he still
had the Armor of Sand on. That point is a little unclear. I'm not
sure what would've happened to the story if Sakura accidentally
managed to kill or incapacitate Gaara. Given what happened to this
chapter just because Sakura is now wearing a _mask_, the reactive
revision potential is chilling to contemplate...
Heh.
I wouldn't think it would kill or incapacitate Gaara at this point, but
it certainly might injure or at least irritate him.
What would you even call it of she were having a guilt trip about
hurting _herself_ O_o;?
I don't know, but I'm sure there's a term for it.
(There are also some really _nasty_ explanations one could use for why the
clone came up to Sakura before its destruction, if one was going to go
that way...)
Ouch! I'm not sure how Sakura would deal with something like _that_;
talk about being messed up...
Tell me about it; I feel a little guilty for even thinking it up. :)
Thanks! Next comes 'Release,' which hopefully won't take as long;
fewer things to break in that chapter...
Heh. Have fun!