David Johnston wrote:

��judging from what Humbug said, and if those Host Club losers are
indication, 

any indication

use most of your grammar corrections.

this Man Beast guy is up to no good. Apparently he�s some

animal rights loon that�s calling for likeminded nutjobs to rise up and

like-minded (but nutjobs is fine)

Went over the two suggestions about this. Will work on something. :)

�So what should we do to the varlets?� Thor asked, stood imperiously

Thor is currently seated, isn't she?

% Will change.

Xxxxxxxxxxxxx

In the main research lab of Kobayashi Pharmaceuticals, Man Beast stood
before a large bank of computer terminals, appearing as though he owned
the world. Flanking him were his most important feline minion, Tabur,

Doesn't he only have one feline minion?

 Actually he does have two, but Overrider is not as important. He and 
the other Ani Men with noses realize she's feline by her scent since 
they first met her in the prologue.

�There is a race of enigmatic beings, thousands of feet tall and each
encased in its own unique armor, called the Celestials. 

Or Evangelions.  The records are a little foggy on that point.

% Heh. We do know Adam was destroyed by Odin at some point.

They go around

from life bearing planet to life bearing planet, since that is what they
do. They visited Earth a million years ago and examined the �highest�
life form: your ancestors. They decided to experiment on this �highest�
life form on a genetic level and see what would happen.

�They created three unique types of beings from that first common
ancestor. One was a now extinct race called the Eternals. 

If they are really extinct, they didn't exactly live up to their billing.

Actually a small handful did survive, though the High Evolutionary is 
unaware of it . When Zuras was deposed by, well, I'm not saying who, he 
and a handful of Eternals left for Titan and founded a colony there. 
Also the Youma aren't dead. They're trapped in the Negative Zone. Of 
late Beryl sidled up to Annihlus there and has attacked the combined 
Fantastic Four/Challengers of the Fantastic team on several occasions in 
the NZ. Although as will be mentioned eventually, millinia ago an 
extradimensional traveller called Ulluxy's Kwan Tae Syn stumbled on 
Beryl in the NZ and struck a deal with her and has been using the 
shattered reminents of an object of power called the Bloodgem to bring 
Youma over one at a time in an effort to steal human lifeforces to 
escape. Luckily, an immortal called Ulysses Bloodstone has been tracking 
down the buggers over the centuries and whacking them as they threaten 
humanity (Unlike a certain Sailor, he needs no pet sidekick or senshi 
backing him up). He does have his daughter helping in the current day, 
though I'm not saying who she is, only that she will be familiar.

 first rake tore through part of Giant Man�s mask, drawing blood and
nearly claiming one of his large orbs. Giant Man threw his arms over his
face in an effort to ward off the attack from the avian member of the
group. He silently cursed the fact he couldn�t just grow higher, due to
the lower ceiling of the lobby, and out of reach of Bird Man. 

Out of reach?  He seems to be foggy on the concept of flying opponents.

% Heh. True. But he is panicked right now, and honestly, his heart is 
barely in this whole hero thing.

�Nihao. Am Tigra, the Were Woman,� she purred, making a display of
licking the blood from her claws.

I see "Elektra" found a new sensei.

% This has been built up for some time. Now it's coming into focus.

% Thanks for the help. Mucho appreciated.

DB Sommer


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