Aaron Nowack wrote:

Hmm... should it be "Poor, poor Sakura-chan" again or does this one
actually merit a "Poor, poor Anko-chan"?  :)

	At this point, I'm inclined to say that they deserve ea-- er, that they
*complement* each other very nicely.
	(As an involuntary comedy duo, if nothing else)

Anyways, another good chapter/part of a chapter/whatever.  I think the
additions worked nicely, so nothing to worry about on that front IMO.

	Getting interested in a story early on, when it's possible to offer
C&C:  Good.
	The agony of anticipation, waiting for the next chapter to come out,
and going through nasty withdrawal symptoms in the meantime:  BAD.

:D



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