Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Re: [Fanfic][Naruto] Suiren, Chapter 7: Contact...
From: "Eimii" <>
Date: 11/25/2006, 1:17 AM

Well, we'll see what I can find that might use some changing.
not much, but one never knows.

I think i was going to go into more detail during Sakura's visit to 

Hmm.  I don't think that would add that much, though it wouldn't hurt
either.  We see the important part, after all.  Unless there's some
additional information or hints you want to add in there, I think it's
probably fine as is.

I think it had something to do with why nobody has brought up Sakura's 
pre-existing conditions by this point. After all, even before she had 
her run in with Anko, Sakura's 'natural' response to genjutsu invasion 
was notably... odd.

And good luck breaking that writer's block with the next chapter.  I
hate it when that happens to me.

I believe i shall just keep doing these renewals until i'm in a 
mood again; it's been a while since the actual, original series has
entertained me, which makes writing fanfiction for it hard...

Heh.  There's been enough entertaining bits and pieces to keep me at
least a bit interested, and a good number of useful additions to the
fanfic writer's toolbox.  The various disappointments actually sort of
inspire me, since they make me want to tell the story "right."

I just hope the story stops treading water soon.  Even the recent 
event didn't do much to advance the plot in any real fashion.

Heh.... i'm not so much about telling the story 'right' as telling it so 
that not everybody acts like an idiot ^_^;

Poor, poor Sakura-chan.

Sakura gets abused a lot in this story, but only because i like her 

I understand.  I tend to do the same to the characters I like, also. 

Such a twisted expression of 'love' grows from anime fandom -_-;...

"...I think I would like that, Kiba-kun," came a quiet, hopeful 
from behind the boys. "Could you help me?"


I don't think i could write a Naruto fic where Hinata isn't cute; i'm
not sure i could wrap my mind around the concept...

Somewhere in the back of my mind, I've got a story idea building that
has Hinata as much more of a dark, angsty type.  But it'd probably 
up being a cute type of dark angst, anyway.  :)

(The idea basically involves swapping the ages and roles in the story 
 Neji and Itachi, so Neji slaughters the whole Hyuuga Clan except
Hinata and joins Akatsuki while Itachi is in Team Gai.  It'll probably
never get written, since I've yet to figure out what the _plot_ would
really be.)

Haha! Having no plot has never stopped _me_ from writing a fic... but 
then, i've never _finished_ a fic either ^_^;. That is an idea i haven't 
heard before, and i do wonder what sort of twist this change would 
introduce in the Naruto world. The Hyuuga, despite their abilities, 
aren't nearly as feared as the Uchiha were, i think...

I've considered just using profanities... but honestly, i don't know 
very good variety of them myself, and Sakura has a really, really 
mouth when she's upset. If she and Tayuya ever meet, it's going to be
ugly ^_^;;...


I hope Suiren makes it to that part of the story; I have a feeling it
would be very... interesting.  :)

If Suiren gets that far, it will likely have already deviated from canon 
by quite a bit. I've got some ideas... but i have to get there, first 


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