Subject: [FFML] Re: [HP][Draft1] Paladin Chapter 2
From: "Arthur Hansen" <arthurh3535@gmail.com>
Date: 11/13/2006, 10:57 AM
To: StudioPC
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>

On 11/12/06, StudioPC <studiopc@sbcglobal.net> wrote:
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is the creation of J.K. Rowling. No money is
being made from this and no such intent should be inferred.

I'm not familiar with the Oath stuff from David Weber (strange, as I
adore his Honor Harrington stuff) that seems fairly standard in set
up.

I just found Ginny to be terribly out of character.

She seems to have lost all of her spunk, hot-headedness and fire and
totally sidelines herself when Greyback shows up, not even attempting
to use any of her Dumbledore's Army skills (or more, as this Ginny is
older.)

She only starts to show of her fire again when you are in the
aftermath with the tiny godling. And even then, kinda folded quickly.

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