Subject: [FFML] [C&C] Re: [fic][YST/SM] Ronin Summer: Convergence 9
From: Aaron Nowack
Date: 11/5/2006, 5:14 PM
To: Morgan Hudson
CC: ffml@anifics.com

Finally, getting around to this...

Morgan Hudson wrote:
NEW-AND-IMPROVED LEGAL DISCLAIMER: Legally, the Sailor Senshi belong to 
Kodansha and
Cloverway, and the Samurai Troopers are the property of Sunrise and Bandai 
Entertainment. Creatively, I can't lay claim to them either - that would be 
Naoko Takeuchi who made up the Senshi and Hajime Yatate who thought up the 
Troopers. I am only borrowing them for a few chapters, and I really do 
intend no lasting harm.

Like that will save you once the personal injury lawyers get into
things...  :)

Standard C&C Disclaimer:  All the below is my only occasionally useful
humble opinion, my only occasionally correct grammatical and spelling
corrections, and/or my only occasionally funny humor.

	Cradling her bleeding arm to her chest, Sailor Moon took a deep
breath and screamed. Her shrill cry split through the mist-veiled clearing
and echoed off of the shadowy buildings that surrounded them. The large
red garnets mounted in her hair gleamed dimly, and began to glow as she
screamed again. This time, her shriek somehow rose and fell at the same
time, the very air around her rippling and warping as her siren-like call
escalated through every possible octave at once. The echoes and
reverberations squealed and bounced against each other until the only
thing audible was a constant, high-pitched tone.

........bringing _that_ back, huh?

	"Why you crafty little horn dog," Shuu said with a chuckle as he
ruffled Shin's hair, "I thought you might be a little interested in
her...."

	"Of course I'm interested," Shin replied. "When Nise Suiko showed
up, she was the first one he attacked. Usually that blackguard goes
straight after me, so if he was willing to pass over a chance to rumble
with his favourite enemy just to pick a fight with her, there must be a
reason. I'm betting there must be something about that girl that makes
her a threat to Nise Suiko, and I'm going to find out what."

	"You're a hopeless romantic, buddy," Shuu sighed in resignation,
as Shin gave him a confused look.

...hah.

Also, what class was Nise Suiko before he multi-classed into Blackguard?
 </bad D&D joke>

	"Gosh, I hope destroying railway property isn't illegal," Sailor
Venus mused to herself as she examined her handiwork. "If I get the cops
after me again, Artemis will never let me live it down."

*snort*

	"Hurry along, Ryo Sanada," the wizard cackled softly to himself.
"Play your part, like the finely tuned puppet you have always been. Know
it or not, YOU shall be the ultimate instrument for our revenge on that
grotesque fool Radanthus, as well as everyone else who has wronged me!
How better to punish you for what you have done, than to turn you against
the very people you care about the most? The Celebration of the Dead
cannot come soon enough for me, and it shall be all too soon for you...."

"...and Radanthus is standing right behind me.  Crap."

	"So," the woman said, her face taking on a strange expression as
she idly crumpled the paper in her fist, "you're a PRIEST, are you? Well,
that just changes everything...."

Should be priestess, no?  And the rest below.


Hmm... so I wound up not having much that was terribly useful to say
this time, it appears.  Oh well.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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