David Johnston wrote:

He tried to lurch forward, but was held back by a horde of teenage girls 
shouting at him to not do it and stay out of harm�s way. Unfortunately 
for the Grizzly, the exo-skeleton he wore only enhanced existing 
strength, and since he had so little to begin with, he was easily 
overpowered by the determination of Furinkan�s female populace. All he 
could do was cry at the indignity of it all.
   

Gosh, you wouldn't think being fused with a supervillain would make a 
guy that much less formidable.
 

Heh. True. These guys are more comic relief than a genuine threat. Much 
like the villains they were based upon.

I think Firefly, the only dangerous one, is the only villain to be 
beaten in the opening sequence of his only two appearances (Nova, then 
Power Man and Iron Fist)

The Butterfly looked on in horror at how his fellow club members had 
been decimated. 
   

I suggest "subdued".  They weren't actually being killed.

 Also there 
were fewer than nine of them to start with.
 

Heh. Yeah, I rememebr the episode of Monk that pointed that out. I 
should see if the dictionary as accepted the other uses people apply to 
it now.

�For a change, I�m inclined to agree with Tamaki, except for the �my� 
part� Humbug said in a pained voice.

�But she feels so good,� Happosai cooed.

The Butterfly lowered his faceplate and its sharpened proboscis. �You 
idiot! He�s a guy, not a girl.�
   

Tamaki turned gay?
 

No. I only could bring myself to watch the first ep, and while I read 
about the later parts of the series, you have to admit he seemed to be 
coming on to Haruhi when he thought she was a guy. So I twisted things 
around a bit here.

Thanks for the help.

DB Sommer

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