Despite the fact Ranma's speech has improved
greatly, and the iffy-ness of how the story came
about, I really enjoyed it. 

  There are waaay too many fics out there that
disregard Genma as a strong, martial artist obsessed
father, that, while morally ambiguous, still cares for
his son's well-being. Not to mention too much focus on
the Cat-Fist thing. There are plenty of manga out
there (cough*dbz*cough), that do a lot worse, to much
younger. Not even the Creator (of Ranma) herself
thought that much about it...

  Anywho, I enjoyed the story. If you revamp it, it
should be more story like, than explanation like.
Flesh it out a little, I think.


--- Ben Jernigan <selfemployedninja@gmail.com> wrote:

"Pops"
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a Ranma 1/2 FanFiction
by Ben Jernigan AKA Exar

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Ranma 1/2 is the creation of Rumiko Takahashi and is
distributed in the US
by VIZ. I claim no rights to these characters.

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