Aaron Nowack wrote:

Jumping backward in time from my last C&C for another Sailor
Moon/Spider-Man story (which is an odd enough combination that I'm
really surprised that there are three of which I'm aware).

Well, more accurately, it's a Sailor Moon/Girlfriends of the Marvel 
Universe  fic.

Hmm.  I really can't say that much in general comments, as there isn't
all that much to comment on.  It's a good opening, but it really feels
more like a teaser or the first couple of scenes of a chapter rather
than a whole first chapter.  

Yeah.  The real first chapter's going to take longer to write than this 
squib I hastily knocked off in a night.  Thanks a great deal for your 
help.


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