Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] [Naruto] One Hundred Days - Chapter Twelve: Treachery and Deceit
From: Aaron Nowack
Date: 8/14/2006, 1:56 PM
To: "Joel N. Fischoff" <petrukio@rcn.com>
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>

Joel N. Fischoff wrote:
Wow, I'm amazed Neji would willingly admit a glaring weakness like that.
Hmm.  I'll probably rework Neji's line here a bit to soften it.

I'm not sure that that's such a good idea.  I think that Neji *would* say 
something like that.  He's a genius, yes, but in order to develop - on his 
own - the family arts, he has to have a good concept of who he is himself. 
And that includes his own limitations.

The fact that he's telling this to Sakura could be construed as a gesture 
of respect, in that she nearly kicked his ass and taught him about 
underevaluating his opponents.  It might be good to have, instead, Sakura 
recognize that as exactly that, even feel flattered for a moment or two.

Good points.

Right, because he was EVER so easy on Hinata in the FIRST Chuunin 
exams...

His hatred of Hinata at the time was personal, an issue of main versus 
branch family.  He barely knows Sakura.  There's a difference.

Indeed, but I think there's a need to make Sakura's reasoning more
explicit here.

Gee, she's nice.
It tends to be drowned out by Gaara's murderous psychosis, but his
siblings are kind of jerks too.  :)

Makes one wonder how Gaara eventually becomes Kazekage.  I mean, other than 
being the old Kazekage's kid.

I suspect it probably involved Gaara announcing one day that he was now
Kazekage, and nobody feeling lucky enough to risk arguing with him.  :)

Thank you for the comments!

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