Henry J. Cobb wrote:

"K'thardin" <kthardin@tenchifanart.com>	wrote:

Autobot City on Earth - One Year Later

It has been one year to the day since the devastating attack on 
Autobot City on Earth by Decepticon forces that took the lives of 
nearly two hundred of the US Military forces and almost thirty 
Autobots,

I think this would work better if you opened with a framing 
device, such as a news reporter to give a context to work inside.

It was basically meant to be your generic news article you can find on any news website and several
blogging sites.  If you have something specific in mind, I'm open to suggestions.

K'thardin
"Kill 'em all!"
	-Lots of people


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