Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Transformers] One Year Later |
From: "Henry J. Cobb" <hcobb@io.com> |
Date: 8/9/2006, 2:29 AM |
To: ffml@anifics.com |
"K'thardin" <kthardin@tenchifanart.com> wrote:
Autobot City on Earth - One Year Later It has been one year to the day since the devastating attack on Autobot City on Earth by Decepticon forces that took the lives of nearly two hundred of the US Military forces and almost thirty Autobots,
I think this would work better if you opened with a framing device, such as a news reporter to give a context to work inside.-- Henry J. Cobb http://www.io.com/~hcobb/anime/ .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List----. | Administrators - ffml-admins@anifics.com | | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@anifics.com | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `---- http://ffml.anifics.com/faq.txt -----'