On 7/17/06, Xelloss Metallium <xelloss51@yahoo.com> wrote:
This is actually the first piece of Haruhi fanfiction
I've seen yet, so congratulations on that front.
I think I managed a first for Caravan Kidd, too. Perhaps an only,
come to think of it....
I'd definitely like to see more of this soon (although
I am making this reply a rather long time after its
posting. I need to check my inbox more frequently.)
Chapter two of (I think) four is coming slowly. The sequel series is
almost completely plotted out at this point, though. ;)
I did notice one discrepancy from the source, though -
Doesn't Kyon always refer to Yuki as Nagato-san?
I believe so. I thought about it for a while, but I also have the
'Mikuru' vs. 'Asahina' thing, and Yuki calls Haruhi Haruhi instead of
Suzumiya. It's kind of tricky, remembering how everyone calls
eachother. Think I can let it slide? ;)
And hey, even if it is late, I can't complain. Look at how much I
lagged on C&Cing the Moldiver fic! Thanks for the comments. :)
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~XM~
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