eimii wrote:

Non-Yaoi Warning: Only one male in this chapter again, so i'm pretty 
sure
there's no Yaoi here...

With Kagebunshin no Jutsu around, that doesn't necessarily follow...

This is true, but who writes Naruto-on-Naruto Yaoi? >_<;...

And i don't mean the kind where one of them changes into a girl! I'm 
_sure_ there are plenty like that...

It took a lot less time to revise this chapter than i was 
anticipating; i
actually thought it was a lot longer than this ^_^;. I'm considering
combining it with the previous chapter now, since they happen one 
right
after the other without any significant time gap.

On the one hand, that's true.  On the other "*...Dammit, don't make me
feel sorry for you, monster woman...*" is such a great line to end a
chapter on.

Either way should work, though.

Hmm... well, i'm still considering it. I do like that as an end line as 
well, though...

"Pft- this is nothin'. A little misunderstanding like this is easy 
fix to
later, so why worry about it?"

Famous last words.

Well, actually, it probably would be easy to fix if Anko wasn't more
interested in fanning the flames...

Indeed; poor, poor Sakura -_-;...

She still had to bite back the first words that leapt into her mouth 
when
she saw the smug look the jounin was wearing, but with an effort she 
managed
to still her tongue. "...Could you _please_ not egg me on anymore," 
she
pleaded, fighting to keep her voice calm and even. "This is serious. 
I never
had 'impulse control issues' before, and it's starting to scare 
me..."

Well, not _most_ of the time.  Just when Naruto was around.

This is true, and there _was_ one other incident that Anko specifically 
would remember: Sakura's outburst in the flower shop. I hadn't 
considered the possiblity of Anko bringing that up here, but now i may 
have to revise their conversation because if Anko _did_ bring it up, it 
opens up a whole new can of worms for Sakura's theories and assumptions 
about why she's behaving 'oddly'...

"...why are you doing this to me?"

"Because it's fun!"

Anko's way of the ninja: if it's fun, do it!

And woe be to anyone that gets in the way of Anko's fun...

Huh.  Really wound up not having anything to say this time.  It's 
tough
to come up with suggestions for improving something this good.  :)

Well, i like it when things make sense, and there are a few points in 
this chapter that don't _quite_ make sense, it seems, so i'll be sending 
up a revised version in the future for people to pick at ^_^;...

I'm glad you enjoyed it, though! I'll try not to break it too much while 
i try to fix it >_<;...

~Eimii 


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