StudioPC wrote:

Ami felt something she didn't even know was there slot into place. It  
felt . . . right. He smiled and she felt a stab of heat in her belly.

"I am," she said, but it came out in a squeak. She coughed and  
managed a bow. "I am," she said more normally.

He returned the bow. "Makato James Wantanabe. M.J. to my friends.  
Pleased to meet you."

Shouldn't that be Watanabe?

Bruce shook his head. "Worse. Unless they're planning on building a  
bunch of Gamma snoopys, there's enough here to turn the entire  
business district into rubble 

Is that all?  I thought it would be big.

"I'll be in good company," Usagi said, making a gesture of dismissal.  
"Besides, ruling the dead is a woirthwhile career goal."

worthwhile

Now I _know_ you spelled that right before.

"Porn is an art form too," was Usagi's response when Flash gave her  
look as they left the train in Shinjuku. "What? You can't masturbate  
and find inspiration at the same time?" Flash opened and shut her  
mouth several times and Usagi sighed. "Flash, you need to get laid."

"That's what got me into this mess!" Flash snarled.

"Oh yeah," Usagi said thoughtfully and hopped a low barricade.

Had either Ami or Flash been paying closer attention, they might have  
noticed that in doing so, Usagi had perfectly duplicated M.J. when  
he'd hopped his fence earlier. Even the running start she'd taken.

Perfectly duplicated.

Er...so?

Sailor Jupiter and Spiderwoman had presented a problem. Both were  
tall and most definitely female in all regards. 

So you're saying they're...talented?

Magnetite forced her emotions under control. "So, Sailor Moon, amaze  
me. How did you figure it out?"

"I didn't. Sailor Jupiter did."

"And your being here, with all these soldiers?" Magnetite said  
through gritted teeth as she realized that it was all falling apart."

Stray punctuation.

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