Good show - caught my attention well enough that any spelling errors just
slipped under the radar. It's a mite too long for line-by-line C&C anyway -
90 pages?!?

Author's Random Ramblings

1) And that's a wrap on the longest chapter yet.  Note to self, for
future reference: do not plot large tournaments in stories where the
format demands the entire tournament be covered in one chapter.

That depends on how much detail you put into it. I'm not saying this should
have been written differently, but it's very possible to condense an entire
tournament into a few lines per fight. (Can't give you a direct example in
fanfic right now since it's been a while, but for an example in Anime, take
the tournament in Kiba - all of which except for the final match was
condensed into half an episode...)
 

2) Not coincidentally, this chapter took fairly long to write.  Still,
in my book, any chapter whose writing time is measured in weeks rather
than months is a good thing.

I could not produce anything of this length in years, so I'm not
complaining. I think I've missed one of the latest chapters, though - maybe
more than one. Had some e-mail trouble.
 

4) Next time, in One Hundred Days Chapter Twelve, Treachery and Deceit:
Jiraiya and Naruto begin to realize that they're in much more danger
than they had thought in the Lightning Country.  But possibly less than
they'd be at home at home, because the Mist and Sound are finally ready
to make their move...

I'm hoping for a daring, none-too-well-thought-out rescue of a certain
masked lazy bastard by his former pupil... and nearly half the Leaf gang
wearing vests...

SP



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