Jenny Chan wrote:

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[Kannazuki no Miko][Lemon] Finally Healing

Finally Healing
A Kannazuki no Miko Fanfic
By Jen-chan
jen-chan@shaw.ca
June 20, 2006 - July 5, 2006

DISCLAIMER: This fanfic was written with knowledge of Kannazuki no 
Miko derived from the entire twelve episode fansubbed series. 

One of the advantages of working from a fansubbed work is that few 
people will be qualified to dispute the canonicity of your 
characterisations, much less be such rabid fans that they start 
ranting:"Don't you know that Souma and Himeko were DESTINED?".  Of 
course the downside is that few people will even know what you are 
talking about.

Even now, with very little effort, she could feel Chikane-chan's kisses 
tickling down her body, across her stomach. Her fingers, slightly 
calloused from all her time perfecting her craft, were a charming 
contrast to her petal-like lips as they explored her. They left 
glorious, burning trails on her skin, so very different from the rest 
of her, keeping Himeko delightfully tethered to earthly desires whilst 
the rest of her body floated in a world of soft clouds...

Maybe that should be "mind"?

"Uh, Himeko? You're nosebleeding."

Not that this is a criticism of your joke, but I wonder, do they ever 
show girls getting that virgin nosebleed?

Himeko bit her lower lip, and tried to will herself out of the 
spiraling depression. "Chikane-chan hasn't touched me since. We've gone 
back to the way we were before that night. We still do dates, and we 
still talk but..." Himeko curled her hands into fists in her lap.

Something of a wet rag, eh?

"Oh, Mako-chan, I want her so badly! Ever since that day, I... all I 
want to do is kiss her and touch her and know her skin and her body 
and everything about her! But Chikane-chan...! She... she won't even 
sleep in the same bad as me anymore." Himeko's face fell. That had 

bed

Although sleeping in the same bad could be cool.

been a very devastating blow. At first, she was sure it was because of 
Otoha-san's presence that they had slept in their own rooms, but even 
when the maid had been out of the house and visiting her own family, 
still Chikane-chan had gently demurred. "She won't touch me. At 
all. I screwed it up. I really screwed it up, didn't I, Mako-chan?"

There was silence in the air before Makoto finally sighed dramatically 
and Himeko looked up to look at her friend. Makoto had a bemused 
twinkle in her eye. "I don't think you've entirely screwed up, Himeko, 
but there are some things you're doing that I definitely don't 
understand. I mean, you say you want to kiss and touch her, so, 
what's stopping you?"

The blonde gave her former roommate a confused look. "But I just said, 
Chikane-chan won't touch me."

"Yes, but what's stopping you from touching her?" 

Well, I'm the girl!

Chikane began to tremble uncontrollably.

"You played with me. You brutalized me. You made me bleed and cry."

Do it again!

Himeko turned Chikane around, the taller woman obeying like a broken 
child. Shaking, tears streamed from the corners of shimmering blue eyes, 
cascading silently down a face twisted into a grimace of revulsion. Himeko 
tenderly put a hand onto that face, still beautiful to her even in its 
pain, and wiped away the tears.

"Because you had to. Because the alternative was worse. 

Inquiring minds want to know.  What was the alternative?


So you didn't

ask for forgiveness. You simply, purposefully, took yourself out of my 
heart. Or tried to. You failed." Himeko smiled tenderly. "I'm glad you 
didn't ask for forgiveness, because I wouldn't have given it to you. 

"There was nothing to forgive."

Those beautiful blue eyes, so bottomless she could drown in them, 
widened in surprise, and in confusion.  


"Chikane-chan, I don't know where those dreams came from. I don't know 
why you dream them, and why I know them. 

Drat.  That mean she probably can't even remember whatever the 
alternative was.  Meaning you really can't put it in the story.


What I do know, is this. Even

after all that, you will never hurt me."

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AUTHOR'S NOTES & OMAKE

Comments and Criticism would be most greatly appreciated! 

Specifically, I'd like to know if the lemony bits worked. 

Well it's nice to see a lesbian scene written by someone who seems to be 
actually familiar with female anatomy.

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