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[Kannazuki no Miko][Lemon] Finally Healing

Finally Healing
A Kannazuki no Miko Fanfic
By Jen-chan
jen-chan@shaw.ca
June 20, 2006 - July 5, 2006

DISCLAIMER: This fanfic was written with knowledge of Kannazuki no
Miko derived from the entire twelve episode fansubbed series.

One of the advantages of working from a fansubbed work is that few
people will be qualified to dispute the canonicity of your
characterisations, much less be such rabid fans that they start
ranting:"Don't you know that Souma and Himeko were DESTINED?".  Of
course the downside is that few people will even know what you are
talking about.

Yes, the relative obscurity of this series made me wondered whether or not I 
should even bother with the FFML before sending it straight to shoujoai.com 
(both powered by anifics!) I really wanted more "literary" type C&C though, 
so, I thought I'd try my luck. Thanks for reading!

Perhaps I've been hanging around the wrong fandom, but I don't think I've 
ever heard the Souma + Himeko = Destined rant before.

Even now, with very little effort, she could feel Chikane-chan's kisses
tickling down her body, across her stomach. Her fingers, slightly
calloused from all her time perfecting her craft, were a charming
contrast to her petal-like lips as they explored her. They left
glorious, burning trails on her skin, so very different from the rest
of her, keeping Himeko delightfully tethered to earthly desires whilst
the rest of her body floated in a world of soft clouds...

Maybe that should be "mind"?

Hmm. I guess 'mind' would make more sense. I was trying to convey that 
everything about Chikane is 'soft' except for her fingers, but mind works 
too...

"Uh, Himeko? You're nosebleeding."

Not that this is a criticism of your joke, but I wonder, do they ever
show girls getting that virgin nosebleed?

I've only seen it happened once, spectacularly, on Combustible Campus 
Guardress. I didn't know the human body had *that* much blood in it.

"Oh, Mako-chan, I want her so badly! Ever since that day, I... all I
want to do is kiss her and touch her and know her skin and her body
and everything about her! But Chikane-chan...! She... she won't even
sleep in the same bad as me anymore." Himeko's face fell. That had

bed

Although sleeping in the same bad could be cool.

Argh! >_< Thank you!

been a very devastating blow. At first, she was sure it was because of
Otoha-san's presence that they had slept in their own rooms, but even
when the maid had been out of the house and visiting her own family,
still Chikane-chan had gently demurred. "She won't touch me. At
all. I screwed it up. I really screwed it up, didn't I, Mako-chan?"

There was silence in the air before Makoto finally sighed dramatically
and Himeko looked up to look at her friend. Makoto had a bemused
twinkle in her eye. "I don't think you've entirely screwed up, Himeko,
but there are some things you're doing that I definitely don't
understand. I mean, you say you want to kiss and touch her, so,
what's stopping you?"

The blonde gave her former roommate a confused look. "But I just said,
Chikane-chan won't touch me."

"Yes, but what's stopping you from touching her?"

Well, I'm the girl!

<snicker> Yes, Himeko, yes you are...

Chikane began to tremble uncontrollably.

"You played with me. You brutalized me. You made me bleed and cry."

Do it again!

... now I wonder how differently the show would have turned out if *that* 
had happened. O_o;;;

Himeko turned Chikane around, the taller woman obeying like a broken
child. Shaking, tears streamed from the corners of shimmering blue eyes,
cascading silently down a face twisted into a grimace of revulsion. 
Himeko
tenderly put a hand onto that face, still beautiful to her even in its
pain, and wiped away the tears.

"Because you had to. Because the alternative was worse.

Inquiring minds want to know.  What was the alternative?

SPOILER ALERT:

To kill her. Personally, I think brutal betrayal by the one you love and 
trust is far worse than death, but I think Chikane was gunning for The 
Cosmic Reset all along...

So you didn't

ask for forgiveness. You simply, purposefully, took yourself out of my
heart. Or tried to. You failed." Himeko smiled tenderly. "I'm glad you
didn't ask for forgiveness, because I wouldn't have given it to you.

"There was nothing to forgive."

Those beautiful blue eyes, so bottomless she could drown in them,
widened in surprise, and in confusion.


"Chikane-chan, I don't know where those dreams came from. I don't know
why you dream them, and why I know them.

Drat.  That mean she probably can't even remember whatever the
alternative was.  Meaning you really can't put it in the story.

No, not really. And because I highly disagree with Himeko in that I think 
the alternative was the better choice of the two by far.

What I do know, is this. Even

after all that, you will never hurt me."

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AUTHOR'S NOTES & OMAKE

Comments and Criticism would be most greatly appreciated!

Specifically, I'd like to know if the lemony bits worked.

Well it's nice to see a lesbian scene written by someone who seems to be
actually familiar with female anatomy.

Thanks for the comments - I really appreciate it! 



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