Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][Ranma][Rewrite] For Better or For Worst-Case Scenario Ch. 5
From: RaeMowse@aol.com
Date: 7/5/2006, 12:32 AM
To: rgorman@telusplanet.net, ffml@anifics.com

In a message dated 7/4/2006 11:53:34 PM Eastern Daylight Time,  
rgorman@telusplanet.net writes:
RaeMowse@aol.com wrote:
"A lazy Sunday afternoon," Nabiki said  aloud as she laid across her bed on 
 
her back.  Dressed in  cutoff jean shorts and a loose tee shirt, the 
sleeves  
rolled  up, 

Tee shirts don't have long sleeves in the first place.  What  is she 
going for, the muscle shirt look?  She doesn't have the biceps  to pull 
it off.
Honesty, I've seen her wearing shirts like that in the show. I just went  
with that outfit set.

 Twisted though it seemed, Nabiki actually smiled at the idea of her   
meddlesome sister getting her comeuppance. Serves her right for her  
invasive  actions 
at Nabiki's wedding. Then she frowned,  remembering last night. If  someone 
like Kasumi got hit with  karmic payback - no pun intended, she amended  to 
herself - what  kind of retribution could Nabiki expect? Was she already in 
 the 
 midst of the cashing in that paycheck?

You're married to Ranma.   Don't get much worse than that.
Well, she could be married to Pantyhose Taro, but that's another  fanfic.

He  had to cock an eyebrow. "For what?"
 
She sucked on her  lower lip now, then made the words come out. "For being  
 nosy."

And for shaking you down for money while you were being chased  by a 
maniac with a lethal weapon, and the nudie pictures of you, and  making 
you think you wet the bed...

Nabiki, being nosy is the least  of your crimes.  I guess she's starting 
small.
Exactly, to be honest. I'm surprised someone thought about that.

 Nabiki looked at Ranma sideways for a moment. "Believe it or not, I do  
care  
about things other than myself. Maybe I don't show it  often enough, but it 
 
doesn't make it any less  true."

While that may be true, I'm not sure how its  relevant.
Her justification as to why she's nosy. Things you wished your mother would  
tell you before she rooted though your room and burned all your nudie girl 
mags  when you were 15.

Akane  thought  to herself, as she gazed
out the classroom window. The  substitute homeroom  teacher hadn't arrived 
to 
class yet; the  regular one, Mr. Tawakichi, was out.  She didn't know what 
the 
 real story was, but rumor had it that he split up with  his wife of  
seventeen 
years to get married to a seventeen-year-old former   student of his whom 
he 
had been having an affair with last year. Not  that she  believed such 
creepy, 
outlandish rumors - this was  Japan, not America, after all  

Er...that's not all that  outlandish in Japan, home of lolicon.
The way I see Akane, she would try to look at the good in society as a  
whole, but sometimes, she just has to be realistic, much to her chagrin.

A  different story in America -

Why is Akane on this America kick?   Is she thinking of emigrating?
EVERYONE wants to go to America. It cannot be avoided, just like death  and 
mud puddles cars drive through when you have on your best interview  suit.

The  roof suddenly caved in under the shock of Ranma and Nabiki's combined  
 

weight. In hindsight, it was probably already weakened from where  the home 
owner 
 did not see fit to guard it from the elements,  and as a result, the 
structure  beneath had rotted away.  However, that did not stop the pair 
from falling  
through and  crashing into the home owner's bedroom in a tangled heap.

And nobody's  having some afternoon delight to interrupt?  How 
disappointing.   Also maybe pointless.  Why did you do that?
Breaks the rantic rhythm for the characters. I thought about them landing  in 
a room where some weird, kinky shit was going on and the couple stop to ask  
them if they wanted to join in, but I decided against that.

"Mm  hmm. I'll be staying around until I branch off another chain and get   
someone to mange Ucchan's here." 

manage
Thanks. Giving a whole building mange would be one hell of a  feat.

She  looked at him slyly. "Maybe you and Nabiki
would be  interested…?"
 
Ranma laughed. "Me? Running a business?  Nah… Might be up Nabiki's alley,  
though. Put it to her  sometime; she'd probably jump on it."
 
"I'll do  that."
 
There was a knock coming from the inside. Ranma  turned in its direction.  
"Yeah?"
 
Nabiki  opened the shutters. "Hey, your dad wants to see you." There were   
traces of annoyance in her face, though she kept her features neutral  as 
she  
went on. "In the dojo."
 
"What?  The dojo's open now? Thought it wouldn't be open for another few   
days."
 
"Hey, go ahead and see your father,"  Ukyo said. "I'll talk to Nabiki about 
 
that proposition, then  let myself out."
 
"You sure?"
 
 "Positive. You can visit me anytime at the restaurant."
 
 "Okay. Cool. Well, see you later, Ucchan!"
 
"Bye,  Ranchan!"
 
He disappeared into the house, a smile  gracing his lips. "Wow, worked out  
better than I thought!" he  whispered excitedly to Nabiki as he passed by.
 
"Glad  for you," she smiled back. She watched him disappear into the next   
room, then redirected her attention to Ranma's ex-fiancée. Her back  was to 
 
Nabiki, staring out across the yard.
  
"Nabiki…" she said without turning around.
 
 "The business idea sounds interesting, though I'm not one for cooking.   
Let's 
see what'll happen in the next few years first before  anything  else."
 
"Understood."
  
"Anything else you wish to talk about?"
 
Ukyo  didn't reply. Nabiki gave her a minute, then started to close the   
door.
 
"Nabiki."
 
She paused.  "Yes?"
 
"Be good to him."
 
Nabiki  noted the slight trembling in Ranma's friend's shoulders. "I will.  
 
Take as much time as you need. No one will disturb  you."
 
"…Thank you."
 
Nabiki  closed the shutter firmly and made good her word, standing guard 
for   
the whole of 15 minutes. The silence from the other side of the  shutter 
answered  that Ukyo Kuonji had left the  premises.
 
* * * * *
"Sleeping in the dojo  tonight?" Nabiki asked as Ranma rolled  up his bed 
mat.
  
"Yeah," he responded, scooping that and his backpack up. "Pop thinks  I'm  
being stupid, but hey, I haven't been able to spar with  anyone without 
worry  
about something for a week. 

I  don't understand that sentence.

Will correct.

And it's  not like he can tell me what to do now; I
bet mom's keeping him pretty  busy back home."
 
In more ways that one, I bet. Nabiki  shook her head, trying to  dispel the 
mood her thoughts were  already venturing into. "Don't injure  anything."
 
 "Hah. I could go all night," he replied, hoisting his sack onto his   
shoulder.
 
Nabiki tried hard to keep that line in  context with his activity. The dojo 
 
finally freed up - the  mystery behind its lock-up will go unsolved now - 
Ranma  
was  bursting to do what he loves most - martial arts without inhibition. 
It  
was  fortunate that he had an outlet for his pent up desires  that he had 
demonstrated  at least once already. Nabiki, on the  other hand, didn't 
have an 
effective one.  The half-sketched  drawings and half-baked stories she had 
done in 
those times   fitted nicely in a shoebox under her bed, though by all 
rights she 
 should set  the lot of them on fire and pretend they never existed.  
However 
the means, their  separate activities kept them from  being alone together 
for 
too long, which  would result in some  sort of passionate, tragic coupling, 
and

What gives her the idea it  will be tragic?  I mean, more than being 
married to Ranma and NOT  having good sex?

She was watching Romeo and Juilet shortly before that moment. :D

 Later on, he would admit that he couldn't even remember moving, let  alone 
 
acknowledging the presence of the other family members  and his own father, 
but  
almost instantly he was there beside  Nabiki, tossing off the cold steel 
holding  his wife hostage and  cradling her to his body. It took a few 
moments for 
her to   recognize what had happened to her, but once her mind made the 
 connection, all  she could do was cry into his body, trembling all over.  
He tried his 
best to  calm her down, while one thought echoed in  his mind, growing 
hotter 
and hotter  until it erupted into an  inferno.
 
Shampoo…

She wuz framed I tell  ya!  Framed!
If the weapons don't fit, you must aquit!! :D





Adrian  Moten


"Falling in love is something that happens to you, like  getting run over by 
a truck."
-Amy Alkon, the Advice Goddess 


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