Soul Society's morning air was crisp, clean and full of anticipation.  The
Captains and Vice-Captains of the Gotei were all gathered around the Court

Nitpick: It's properly "Gotei 13".

"Vice-Captain Shihouin Ranma, step forward."  The voice of the head of
Central rang out.  The Shinigami in question walked up from his standing
next to the Captain-Commander, Yamamoto Genryuusai Shigekuni.  Dressed

like

a typical Shinigami, Ranma had his hair tied up in a pigtail that went

down

to the center of his back, and his Zanpakutoh sits in a sheath at his

side.

Watch your verb tenses.

"Vice-Captain, your judgment for your crime has been decided.  Though this
crime in of itself did not harm Soul Society for the time being, it had

the

in *and* of.

Only able to take so much of his own self pity, Ranma decided that he

would

do his best to atone for his sin by taking out as many Hollows as

possible.

It was at that moment he heard the woman's scream, followed by that

damnable

roar.  Looking down from the roof, he saw it and its prey.  The Hollow was
insect-like in shape, having six legs and three body parts, but way too
large.  Its mask-covered face let out another roar before looking at its
prey once more.  Its prey was a rather pretty chestnut-haired young woman,
maybe in her twenties, wearing a kimono.

Oh hell, I think I see where THIS is going.

*snip* Nodoka as a Kuinshii...interesting.

Suddenly, one of its legs came off, bleeding that horrible color blood

that

Hollows all bleed.  A young man, dressed in a black hakama

JUST a hakama? No uwagi? :P

"Sugoi! That was amazing!"  The woman looked at him, starry-eyed.  "You

are

so... so... manly!"

*facefault*

The woman did get behind him, though the four Hollows surrounded them as
they materialized from Hueco Mundo.

"Um... Shinigami... we're in trouble aren't we?"

No SHIT, y'THINK?

"Alright, Nodoka-san.  You can see me, but that doesn't mean much but
explain that they are after your high reiatsu."

That sentence needs an enema.

"Alright, Nodoka-san. You can see me...that must explain why they're after
you; but it doesn't explain your high reiatsu, or how you know what I am."

BTW, if you're not going to capitalise reiatsu consistently, don't
capitalise it at all--you've done so earlier.

"A Quincy?  Why didn't you defeat that Hollow yourself then?"

"I'm... I'm pregnant."

Nodding as if that explained everything,

It pretty much does, dunnit?

"Ishida-sensei, Happosai-sensei!"

"Well, well, No-chan, it seems you have gotten yourself in a little mess.

I

can't stand it when pretty ladies are in danger.  Of course I'll have you
reward me later for saving you."

...dude, she's PREGNANT. *disgusted*

Ranma launched his attack at the Hollow while it was distracted by the
Happodaikarin, and was able to purify it instantly.  Panting heavily,

Ranma

sheathed his sword once more.  Happosai and Ishida-san were in a similar
condition.  Yet another roar resounded through the area.  "What is this?

Night

of the living Hollow?"

*SNRK*

"Ishida, as usual, you only see half of the picture.  That spirit bow

wasn't

only reiatsu; it had some ki mixed in as well.  She poured all her energy
and then some into that shot. It would seem she didn't want to be
overprotected." Happosai's face paled as he noticed something in her
aura.  "Damn,
she was pregnant!"

Ranma looked at the Master.  "What do you mean, 'was'?"

Yup, I DEFINITELY know where this is going.

"I have a technique, known as the Soul Fusion.  The child's reiatsu is far
too low for it to survive.  You, on the other hand, former Vice-Captain,
have plenty of it.  This technique will take your reiatsu and place it in
the child, much in the same way as when you use a gigai."

"Huh?  You mean I'll become the child?"

Yup, called it.

(End Prologue)

I like it! Should be interesting to see where you take this one.

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