Sebastian Palm wrote:

Sewage
   

Or "the importance of the WIS attribute". I can almost see most of the
attributes for these characters in front of me...
 

* At least two out of three of them, anyway. ^_^

Don't have the energy for a line by line, but I thought it was just a tad
predictable

% The catch with short stories is that you need all of your information 
dispensed in a short and timely manner. It's easy to make them 
predicitble. Also this really didn't break any new ground. It was mostly 
just how the story was executed as to whether or not it would succeed.

- not the twist with the lady fair, of course, or the zombies,
but I knew there'd be sewer gas and a fire spell involved pretty much the
moment the wizard mentioned the properties of his headband...
 

% True. Though I think I'll always have him make much ado about it, even 
when there's no fire involved.

It was pretty damned funny, though - I'd read more about these characters if
you can be persuaded to write about them...
 

% Hopefully I'll have the time, but we'll see. I'll be working on some 
of the more ongoing works first.

% Thanks for the comments.

DB Sommer

SP



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