True, but it's one of her best works yet. There really isn't all that much
to complain about, actually. Sure, there's that Happosai bit, and the 'rents
are a bit OOC for the whole 'worship a goddess' bit, but I've seen much
worse from longer fics... far far worse actually.

personally, I give it a CNH rating of 9.5 with an unweighted score of 6.0.

This is the price of freedom: Your last pint of blood, ounce of pain, drop
of courage. Paid in advance. -- Gene Roddenberry's  Andromeda

-----Original Message-----
Interesting... this story had a bit of flow to it.

I have a questions though.

Why would Happousai care if Ranma worshipped a goddess. Happousai would
actually enjoy having another pretty girl around to grope.
Now, if you were to have Beldandy curse Happousai in some really bad
way, that may get him to exile Ranma.

I can see Happousai sentencing Ranma to death... but it would also be
interesting to see them fight it out. Ranma does not tend to accept
commands from Happousai.

This idea has possibility... but requires a bit more thought. Also
requires more meat on the bones.

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