Interesting... this story had a bit of flow to it.

I have a questions though.

Why would Happousai care if Ranma worshipped a goddess. Happousai would 
actually enjoy having another pretty girl around to grope.
Now, if you were to have Beldandy curse Happousai in some really bad 
way, that may get him to exile Ranma.

I can see Happousai sentencing Ranma to death... but it would also be 
interesting to see them fight it out. Ranma does not tend to accept 
commands from Happousai.

This idea has possibility... but requires a bit more thought. Also 
requires more meat on the bones.

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