Anyway, I found this intro a bit long winded. I seem to recall most
of this
explained through dialogue before. I got bored and skipped ahead.
Oh. Sorry. :)
I had alluded to what was going on with Oniwabandanna, but a lot of
people
were really curious as to the exact hows and whys of her return to
youma
status. I guess I might have rambled a bit while I was answering
that. I'll
try to keep a lid on it in the future. ;)
Please don't forget that there are those who don't have access to
*any* of the YST and Sailor Moon is available only in a patchwork
quilt of episodes, which makes it nip and tuck to complete a series.
Some stores are still so clueless that they have the series
intermingled. Plus, I'm too cheap to order the stuff online. ^_^
"Trust me, Ryo: girls
always have stuff like this worked out years in advance. You might
be a
little confused right now, but I can guarantee you that Ami Mizuno
knows
exactly what she's doing."
Aiight. I really like the dialogue these people have.
A lot of people seemed to enjoy it. ^_^
I want more of that
and less overblown author exposition.
Okay, I'll do my best. I do so love to poke my opinions in here and
there,
though. I find too much dialogue gets monotonous. Especially during
fight
scenes: who has time to be monologuing when they are fighting?
Just one of those incredible traits that get heroes (and authors) in
trouble. ;-)
A pretty decent chunk, but real slow going.
It was a pretty slow chapter. Mostly I was just setting up for
things that
are going to be happening later. Also, I really wanted somebody to
fight a
dinosaur.
I stand by that decision. :)
Oddly enough, that same desire is what's holding me up in my story....
Good show. I don't read enough of this stuff....
James
James and the Bluejay
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