Uh oh

Why is it that the words "I've got a plan" always sound like the most 
dangerous words ever spoken...

Because when they're coming from someone like Louie, they are. ^_^

Overall a nice chapter, no real meat, but it serves it's purpose of setting 
up the rest fairly well.

Yeah, that's what others have told us as well.  The action will start 
picking up once they make it inside the guild, hopefully in the next part.

The knowledge of an organized thieves guild is intresting, as is Loiue's 
ability not to rush blindly in... only to rush in. :)

In the manga (At least the four volumes that have actually been released so 
far) there actually is a thieves guild.  And even though Louie is a brute 
who's more prone to beat up his problems, he has proven before that he can 
formulate _some_ plans.  No matter how badly they may turn out. ;)

Thanks again for your comments.  Next part will be out in a day or two.

Eric 'Dragonboy' Holdt

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