--- The Eternal Lost Lurker
<lurkerdrome@sbcglobal.net> wrote:
Forenote: I noticed a specific error too many
times to
type it every time, so I'll write it here. After
an
ellipsis, it's good protocol to put a space
between
the last period and the following word.
That's not an error. It's called "personal style".
I'm hereby serving notice
for all C&Cers in the future to not bother
commenting on the ellipses-space
thing.
*shrug* Just looks messy to me, but not a problem.
"Oi, Rukia."
The diminished Shinigami looked up at her
ITYM "diminutive". I don't think Rukia shrunk any;
she's always been chibi-size.
Her POWERS have been diminished. Which is what I was
referring to. Not her
size.
Ah, I see. So this is set before the trip to
Name^H^H^H^HSoul Society.
"Hey, Fuyubachi! What's next? Fuyubaaaaachi!"
"Huh? Oh...let's get some plastic bags from the
corner market and suffocate
ourselves."
"Whee!"
That kid freaking creeps me out.
She's good at that, isn't she? Kamome is WAY too
genki for a little girl who
wants to kill herself.
Like I said, that alone makes me suspicious. I think
she's secretly a malicious entity disguised as genki
lil' Kamome, trying to keep Fuyubachi and Zebra from
fully realizing the truth.