Very well done, indeed.

And here is my take on how it all ends:

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I wiped the sweat from my brow, and surveyed the landscape about me.

Fragments of "dead" Blancas lay everywhere, some still twitching.
We had succeeded in destroying every one of them

This had taken a great toll on everyone in our village, both
physically and emotionally. Purrl was wandering around in circles,
wailing.  Even though the cats she destroyed were not "real", the
thought of killing others of her species had unhinged her.  She was
going to need some serious therapy.  Mayor Tortimer's shell was
chipped in several places, and he needed rest, but he was busy
directing the cleanup.

And Nook?  He was heading for his store.  He was going to make a
killing on first aid supplies and building materials alone!

The rest of us continued to try to clean up the mess that was once a
beautiful little town.

Then, the earth shook.  It started out as a mild rumble, but became
louder and louder, and the source of the rumble was getting closer
to us.  We all turned in the direction of the sound, and saw Nook
running our way, screaming hysterically.

"It's coming!  RUN!!!!!!!!!"

Over the brow of the hill rolled a huge round "thing".  It was made
up of pieces of destroyed Blancas, trees, rocks, some of our homes,
and included Nook's store.  A little guy with a wide head was behind
it, pushing it in our direction.

And here I thought that Katamaris were just stories we told our
children to frighten them...

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Forgive me, I couldn't resist!


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