Stiel:  So this is _that_ Krista-once-Perry-now-Fisk?

Dragonboy:  Yepper. ^_^

Stiel:  Sweet.

I was wondering if the name change would confuse people.  Nice to know it 
hasn't.  :)

But you can just call me Krista, okay?  ^^;

     Duo dressed in red for the mission. Everything he wore was
dark, deep red, from his velvet vest and tailed coat, to his trim
slacks, to his silk shirt with the fall of lace at his throat and
cuffs, right down to the ribbon that tied off the end of his
braid.

Heero:  I told you to take the suit to the cleaners.  You're never gonna 
get
that ketchup stain out now.

*snerk*

<snip>

     The building rocked with the explosion, and the ballroom
plunged into darkness, and utter chaos.

Stiel:  That might be another unnecessary comma after 'darkness', but I
wouldn't take my word for it.

My poor, darling commas.  How I hate to kill them.  After all the comments, 
though, it seems I must.

Final Thoughts

Dragonboy:  Nice.  Very, very well done.  It seems a shame that there 
wasn't
more to comment on, but honestly, there just wasn't anything else that
looked like it needed changing.  Very vivid and descriptive.  Loved the 
Poe
theme as well.

Thanks.  Glad you liked it.  :)

Stiel:  Thankfully you chose a Gundam Wing story, seeing as that and G
Gundam were the only two we ever watched with any interest.  Like D-boy
said, the word-play made for a very descriptive story, and the story 
itself
was great (Duo is the man, ya know? ^_^)  Great work and, if it's not 
asking
too much, write more, 'kay?

I've got a few more fics up my sleeves.  :)  Thanks for the feedback, guys.

-Krista 


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