Hi Rann,

Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your drabbles. The whole concept is 
relatively new to me and I've only read a few dramatic/romantic ones so far. 
I didn't realize that the format could lend itself to comedy so well too!

My favorite drabbles out of this set are The Reason, First Times, Matched 
Pair and Revenge for a variety of reasons. Mostly, it's because the 
situation as described in the drabble is outrageous or funny by nature - 
you've got some really giggle-worthy ideas! A couple of them (Revenge and A 
Sexy Song) had really good final punch lines! And Matched Pair really made 
me go 'aaaaw' (drabble being a really good format for romance. I think the 
shortness of it really makes the emotion seem more profound and intense).

The line that made me laugh the loudest -  "Later, sweety, you're fifty 
notes from nudity."

Something I'd try to look out for, is to try to tailor more of your drabbles 
to Trigun. The majority of them make use of Trigun-established conventions, 
but a couple of them did feel like a character's name was just slapped into 
the drabble, and really, almost any other name would have worked in its 
stead (Sinful, Love's End)

Thanks for the read!

Cheers,

Jenny
- mostly lurking since '97; will attempt to do my part in keeping the list 
alive



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